Ooh, new chapter already?! Wonderful!

This chapter was so...cozy? I don't really know how to describe it. The perfect length combined with the adorable main topic of Meta Knight reading to Kirby, along with the word choice just creates a nice...atmosphere? I think that's the right word... Oh! And nice references with the books!

The little tidbit about Meta Knight giving each character a distinct voice was also a nice touch, and how he put so much passion into reading the book to Kirby. Honestly, I smiled while reading the whole last section.

So, uh, nicely done! Excited for the next chapter!

Oh my gosh! Somebody else who knows about the Kirby Novels!

I discovered the novels a little bit ago and despair every day once I remember I don't know a lick of Japanese...so, uh, if you could include a chapter that's a brief summary that would be wonderful! I saw the book on the site with the rest of the novels, but I didn't know it was a whole alternate universe!

Okay, uh...anyways, on to the actual fic.

This was VERY nice! (Goodness, I'm using a lot of exclamation points) The pacing was very good, and while it could use a little touching up grammar wise - such as the paragraph towards the end that begins with, "Truthfully, when Meta had said that, he hadn't known what Meta meant..." This one confused me a little bit, especially with the plentiful of commas. I honestly STILL don't really understand it, and I personally suggest to try and re-word it. Something I've learned after writing on my own is that you should try to avoid using too many commas in one sentence, since it then becomes a run-on and confuses the reader. Instead, try incorporating some hyphens (these "-" things) and semicolons! Semicolons take a little bit to master (I honestly still don't have a very good grip on them) but once you do they're very helpful!

And...I think that's it! The dialogue flows nicely and there's a very nice balance between dialogue and descriptions, which adds to the pleasure of reading it. Not to mention, the length is also quite nice; it's not too short to where too much information is crammed into the fic without the proper pacing, and it's not too long to where it's stretched out and begins to bore.

...Basically, what I'm trying to say is that this was a very pleasant read and I can't wait for the next chapter! Opening up my browser to look up an art tutorial but instead noticing this little jewel on the top of the archive page was a pleasant surprise! Please continue this if you have the chance!

Ok, this idea is cute as heck. I loved it!