Hi!
First of all, I want to say that you have chosen the hard path by writing from this many POVs and you managed very well! I wouldn't dare writing romance from someone else's POV.
Although we haven't seen much of their personalities, I liked the confident Hermione when Harry asked her if they were dating. I also liked that Harry asked her, then answered Seamus as if Seamus hadn't heard (and seen) Hermione himself :D
It was nice seeing them from different people's perspectives but I must admit that all those whisperings made me wonder what they were talking about :D
I think my favourite part was Draco's, for obvious reasons (Harry... Hermione... alone... in a broom closet...)
Just as a side note, you could have split the story in different chapters with every chapter having a different person's point of view. Not that it would affect the plot or the flow of the story. Maybe you could get more views and reviews. And you should add Harry to your characters and pair him and Hermione to inform the readers that this is a Harmony story.
I don't know if this was your first attempt at writing but for a first published story, this was really nice! I'll gladly read more if you continue writing Harmony :)
Thanks for writing and sharing!
Take care -xo

ohhh this is so sweet! I like it very much!

This is sweet, i hope this is the real ending of HP's series, but sadly it isn't, thank you for this, i love it

Poor Teddy at the ending he doesn’t know if he’s going to like it or be scarred for life...