Okay. I read the whole thing in one sitting. Let it sit for a couple of days and I love it.

Atarah is an interesting character and (I've played WoW) easy to understand. I do like all of her solutions to problems... although the 'seer' limitation kinda jeeps her from fully going wild and revolutionary in the world.

Given how powerful she is, it would have been interesting.

Honestly, I would prefer if you keep it to one partner, otherwise it would look too much like your other fic faeries. Plus i do not think it will fit her personality. For 10k years if she was going to try poly i think she would have, so try and stick to one man.

I do have a few gripes with some of the things she has done... more accurately... how others have reacted to what she has done.

Being made paragon in dwarven society makes no sense, despite her ties to the Azeroth dwarves. The culture is vastly different and such a kick in the teeth in their tradition and they are REALLY set in their traditions.

The other is tge Chantry. Mother Roselle is a good addition, but a bit non-sensical in a blight ravaged land. Where is her templar/seeker escort? Also I expected more of a redistance from the Chantry. No matter how true it is, they would never accept an elf like her to be andraste's chosen... unless she gathers enough people to show off... the mere mention of such a thing would be heresy to the chantry... they might even take it up to an Exalted March level of offense. That's how set in their ways they are... she is literally challenging tge status quo.

Also... duchess or no... i think Eamon will do everything in his power to try and keep Alistair as his puppet. And wouldn't back down so easily. (Isolde's orlesian influence)

Other than that i really loved the story and I hope you continue it . Have a great day.

So this was fantastic, I really really like the idea and while it is very similar to Fairies in Thedas its different enough. I love them both and can't wait for more. My only criticisms would be to be careful or repeating yourself. Several time you would have the same conversations like the sex talk about foreplay and that no conversation is taboo in the Qun, and a few other that I can't recall, it didn't happen often so just be mindful of it in the future. Looking forward to the next adventure!

OH MY GOD! So I was only reading so far to see if you have an intro explaining which worlds were previously visited and I just couldn't stop reading, it was so good! It's been a long time since I've read something that's caught my attention this hard. Thank you so much I can't wait for more and am so disappointed that I have to work.