Reviews for DxD: The Perfect Demon (Remake) (English version)
lunacyvonklaus chapter 2 . 7/16
Isn't he somewhat super weak? Killed by raynare while have a record of going in missions with slash dog? Doesn't make any sense really
Papa Lenin chapter 2 . 7/13
This has lots of potential and personally I wanna see where this goes. However you NEED someone to read over your grammar. You've placed he's, she's, and names everywhere which confuses the story. So really get some bois to beta for you and then publish. Do that then honestly the general issue is resolved and a story with immense potential continues.
Glitner chapter 2 . 7/9
so much grammar mistakes that i actually have a hard time reading... you put "he and she" in wrong places ... you put wrong names on people who say things and honestly its quite lame to see someone of the Lucifer family serve the fake Lucifer family its like the highest of highest bitch slap to your bloodline lol
lord 7th chapter 2 . 7/10
Man you really need a beta.. So many Grammer mistake and placingin the wrong places.. Writing she for male characters etc etc.. But those can be improved and that's what iam hoping for and the plot though interesting, you haven't explained it properly
Dragonsayianblue chapter 2 . 7/9
Isabella is most likely going to be Lilith descendant. Making her the mother of devil. Also a more matching wife for Rigr since he’s a Lucifer. That my guess.