I really liked this story! It made me laugh and it made me cry.

However I would like to point out some thing that has been bugging me while reading this.

Firstly, the dog's name is Stefan. Not Stefen.

Secondly, it is Curiel. Not Curial.

Lastly, Sabo was never a prince. He and his famile were nobles. His step-brother married the princess of the Goa Kingdom and that is how he became a king.

Don't get me wrong, I really like this story and if my review came out as a hurtful one, then I am so sorry. Maybe you wrote them that way to fit the story better like the Sabo being a prince and all that. If so then please leave that in the author's note.

Thank you for this fanfiction.

I still don't know why it took me so long to realize the initials were Sabo's (though I got it before the end of the story). This is great and I especially like how you included the dog's point of view. Keep up the good work.

waaaah i love this so much! cute and adorable yet a little bit heartbreaking at the same time . thank you for writing this! 3

If this is a one shot maybe you should put it as complete to not confuse everyone? I’ve read a one shot that didn’t say complete and didn’t say it was a one shot, and if it did say it was a one shot and I didn’t read it, I’d be waiting for their next update!

It makes people believe that they discontinued it without a thought.

It’s so good! I love it! I’d like more please you know if you want! I’ll just sit here and wait patiently!