Reviews for A certain classmate revealed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ... It's Saturday man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered this story and have ready all the chapter so far. Here's what I think. I like the concept of people seeing what Touma has gone through. It's quite similar WwEpsilonwW's story, so I can't help but make comparisons. I must ask, why Touma's classmates though? Only a few of his classmates have a real presence in the canon, so having only his class see his memories is an interesting choice. I like the fact that you're starting from the beginning and plan to cover everything. You're is one-upping Epsilon in that regard, which focuses on traumatic memories and is not chronological. However, I do think some of the more important characters should be present to see this. That's the part I'm a little disappointed by. Touma's memory loss was a huge moment, and I wish more people knew about it. I'm really enjoying this story so far. The writing is well done. I just have to wonder if there is a chance of other characters joining in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, thanks for the update! The wait is no problem. Take your time! I'm excited to see what you write next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Real life does tend to intrude into leisure activities and any attempt to deny that will simply lead to frustration or worse. Take your time, figure out how to work in your new personal reality, and continue on from there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take your time, school is a pain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I've seen worse upload schedules, take your time, the most important thing is that you have fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I am loving all the reactions. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, and hope you continue it. This is a question you don't need to answer directly, but are you going up to s3 of Index? And are you going to do the railgun, and accelerator spin-offs? You don't have to if you don't want to. Hope you stay happy, and healthy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chad Akira, goin' in on his quest for Touka's love |
![]() ![]() I like the story keep making chapters please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see Fukiyose's reaction to him saving her, and the clases reaction to touma losing his right arm and when he laughs like a maniac. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How often do you update this story? |
![]() ![]() I can't wait for the Angel Fall Arc and the class reaction to seeing Aogami in a swimsuit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your current format for the comments (character name: "quote" reads more like a script than a narrative. However given the way in which you are working (passages copied and pasted directly from the LN, followed by viewers' comments), it may in fact be the best choice for this particular story. However I wouldn't necessarily recommend applying the same approach to other stories. Assuming you still have the energy to continue once you finish with volume 1 then Fukiyose is going to be in for quite a shock when she learns about how Himigami first met Kamijou Touma. And everyone will be in for a shock if they make it all the way up to Volume 4 (in fact Tsuchimikado may want to see if he can leave the room for that part). Speaking of Himigami, shouldn't she be the one student who would know exactly where their teacher lives (having freeloaded with her for a time before eventually moving into a dorm). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't skip a certain magical index SS volume 1. That volume appears in the 2nd season anime finale. Its the volume where Hamazura made his 1st debut and his first battle against Touma. Although they didn't add a scene where the Necessarius church girls hanging out. Which was a shame. That reminds me, will you also be including the love letter light novel volume? The one where Kumokawa Seria was in. Also i wonder what their reaction would be when they learn about Kanzaki imagining herself as Touma's maid. More specifically her wearing the Fallen Angel Ero Maid costume. |