Reviews for A Selfish Love
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19
Amazing story so far can’t wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!
chloe chapter 2 . 7/18
Good chapter
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 2 . 7/18
Yea Berry needs to engage is brain more. if he continues to help the DEO with the computers and tech while he is still there it will be good for him. It mite be a the push he needs to further is education and work on earning a PHD or 2. even if he does get is powers back he still needs to get a lot faster to make a breach home and even faster to beet Zoom so how will they accomplish this?

Having her falling asleep on his shoulder is a nice touch. But they could shift in there sleep and end up in a compromising position, I wonder how they would react to that, probably very as there is a attraction between them well even if Alex is the one top find them like that before they wake, if she is the one to find them I hope she takes some blackmail material lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
heros bane chapter 1 . 7/10
great chapter.
Chloe chapter 1 . 7/6
Good beginning
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 1 . 7/7
I love the pairing. Him going through a breach like that can open all kinds of possibilities, random earths, maybe even time, who knows. Him without the tachyon device or even knowing about it, will make it harder for him to get back to his earth. Hopefully he will find away to get even faster then Zoom with out the tachyon device helping him , faster then he did in cannon at the end of the season. where he does not have to give up his speed. Maybe on a attempt to go home he comes across Berry Allen from earth 90 and has a true mentor to help him with learning new ways to use his powers and maybe get it through his head that messing time , for what ever reason is a very bad Idea and that of course prevents flashpoint.

I always though Berry kinda wasted his time while recovering, if it was me I would have Berry brush up on his Physics knowledge as i believe it was stated he had a masters in it, so he would not have to rely on what ever version of Harrison Wells shows up. He needs to learn to more independent then he has been but not totally as I do like Caitlin and Cisco and of course Kara with this fic.

Now for the bad... For this fic the only thing I see wrong is the dialog of more then one person in a single paragraph makes really hard to read and keep straight who is saying what.