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Guest chapter 6 . 7/21 Buddy I know you might not do this but can you do instead of gohan landing in bourto he goes 65 million years back in time and he lands to find himself all alone but then he see a female tryanosarus named tyra which she takes care of the sayian child the movie is called Dino time or back into the jurrasic movie released in 2012 and after when she adopts gohan then it takes place in the movie and gohan meets ernie max and Julia there humans if you want to know more watch Dino time thanks please do it if my 10 year old self watches this he would be screaming with joy thank you please |
Itsgokuboi chapter 6 . 7/20 I hope this isn't much but i was hoping you could make a list of everyone's age. So we we could see the age gap between all of them. |
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 6 . 7/20 So when will we see Freezer or some of his soldiers invade in another dimension?, the other humans on planet earth in universe 7 are still alive or dead from Raditz? |
X3runner chapter 6 . 7/20 Little kids arguing is adorable also I really dig that you had gohan be the I’m going to protect my friends gohan that we know and love. Also nice touch making Hinata a boss but still a Good mom. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20 Actually Boruto is two years older than Himawari |
X3runner chapter 5 . 7/19 The irony lil gohan finds Sarada Uchiha of all people pretty. It’s funny that the sayajins like the uchiha draw immense power from emotions and loss... there power coming from a need not a desire an emotional response . It’s also just too cute to see lil gohan get attached so quickly. also would toneri be able to sniff out the non human from gohan and would the fact nither of them are quite human cause toneri to declare gohan his un official little brother causing hanibi to flip at the fact that she already claimed The older non sibling sibling role. I could see getting into the FGO universe Quite easy since it’s timeline is unstable this would allow for a lot of training and fighting could see gohan and freezypops Much stronger minions Literally fighting through space and time and ending up in different places. I’m LoveIng the story and how it’s going can’t wait for your next update. Lastly did Naruto notice that there is a nub where a body part should be randomly on his fins lower back while he was bathing the boy? |
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 5 . 7/18 The deities should at least know or have an idea of the power of Freezer, and not being or perhaps being aware that Freezer can have more power than in its first form or that it can be transformed to the point that nobody could face it, perhaps They can face their soldiers from the weakest to the strongest such as the Ginyu Special Forces, possibly some warriors from other dimensions can fight with their powers and abilities, but they would be below in raw power, therefore the deities of The dimensions could make the best warriors in each world train in a special place where they can increase their powers, in addition to seeing Gohan as the greatest hope in the dimensions for his great potential as a warrior, perhaps we will also see the deities convince Saiyans Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz to side with Freeza or die in a fight. |
Ryuzaki-XJ-9 chapter 5 . 7/18 great story so far, im curious to see where it is going |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17 Keep up the good work buddy your power level is that BEYOND A GOD |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13 this chapter is a SPICY MEATBALL! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13 Dude that an amazing chapter I got an idea can you gohan meets Kurama that would be a good chapter |
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 4 . 7/12 If you did a Timeskip, you could have Hagoromo the Rikudou Sennin or another deity like Whis notify Naruto and Sasuke about the invasion in the multiverse by Freezer, and without notifying Beerus that he would still be asleep, therefore both ninjas together with other Shinobis and Konoha and other villages of the Ninja world, will have to unite again together with the other heroes and warriors in the other worlds to face Freezer and his empire who could also recruit very powerful warriors for the eminent multiversal war. in the dimensions that you could include in addition to Boku No Hero Academia, Nanatsu No Taizai and Fate / Grand order, other worlds that maybe you know or maybe not anime and / or manga like Bleach, Fairy Tail, Medaka Box, Hunter x Hunter , RWBY, Akame Ga Kill, Black Clover, Danmachi, Elfen Lied, High School DxD, Katekyo Hitman Reborn!, Kill La Kill, Toaru Majutsu no Index, Mob Psycho 100, Negima! Magister Negi Magi, To Love-Ru, One Punch Man, One Punch Man, Rosario Vampire, Soul Eater, Yu Yu Hakusho, those are some examples of the worlds you could include in the story, that would depend on you. By the way, when Gohan starts training to become a shinobi, would you also train him with Rock Lee and learn to use the 8 gates? After Raditz killed Goku and Piccolo, the land still exists but without inhabitants or was destroyed? |
X3runner chapter 4 . 7/12 I don’t know if I missed it but did gohan loose his tail? Also If he did would Naruto and the Family think that he’s related to the inzuka due to his senses and his more wild eating habits along with the wildish Hair he has |
Itsgokuboi chapter 4 . 7/12 Ayyyyyyy this chapter good i wonder is there going to be a huge timeskip? |
Maximum Rhapsody chapter 3 . 7/11 If you are going to make Frieza want to conquer the multiverse, he should start sending his weak soldiers first led by stronger soldiers such as Cui, Tagoma, Shisami, Dodoria, Zarbon, and in places where they could invade they would be dimensions of the Shonen type or wherever they go Strong people like Nanatsu No Taizai, Fairy Tail, Boku No Hero Academia, Fate Stay Night, Bleach, etc. I just hope that in the other dimensions the characters of those worlds are not so easily defeated by the levels of power, by the way, because Didn't you make Gohan arrive when Boruto or Himawari were 4 years old? Now I wonder how an alliance between the heroes against Freeza, his army and his new allies would be formed? |