Thanks. Interesting stuff, and your English writing has improved tremendously.

It's not the fact that you kill off Harry that is the problem, It's that everything reads as if each chapter were an outline and not an actual short story. Killing off Harry each time as a tragedy and not humorous is a great idea but the short story format needs work.

more like T for Tarot :D
interesting style, interested to see where this is going
cheers