| Reviews for Jaune Arc The God of Grimm's |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/5 Please continue! |
 0akarigan0 chapter 2 . 7/7 Cool,. espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias. |
| Cloaked-Raven chapter 2 . 7/6 Great idea! poor execution. Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere! plot holes abound! and not to forget everything is out of character and makes zero sense! now I quite like this story line but it lacks any unique qualities, you really need a beta or the like as your spelling is truly appalling a lot of the dialogue makes little sense and many of your minor plotlines are I'll thought out. |
| Thisisawesome89 chapter 2 . 7/6 Ok, this is getting fun, waiting for more ;D |
| Stratos263 chapter 2 . 7/6 Good luck with your new powers jaune |
| Midnight49 chapter 1 . 7/5 Damn I’m interested in this, I wonder if Salem instincts or a feeling told her that she just lost her title of Queen of Grimm. |
| 0akarigan0 chapter 1 . 7/5 Buen inicio espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias. |
| Sorna-Raptor chapter 1 . 7/5 Is English not your first language? For one thing "Grimm's" implies something belongs to someone named Grimm I guess you mean the plural witch is just Grimm. This is VERY rushed as well. Don't think I will follow but I will wish you luck. |
| Stratos263 chapter 1 . 7/5 This will be interesting. Good luck jaune |
