Really liked what you have written so far.

Nah, there’s no way i can keep reading this.

Holy, can you cut down using italics on so many random words, you can get your point across without spamming them. It’s frustratingly annoying to read.

All this BS over what he should tell them just say it's a bloodline ability, and bam no more pissing and moaning over nothing.

I highly doubt someone can truly tell someone else how they use their bloodline abilities. The MC could just say I just do what I feel is right, bam no more forced drama.

Just completed chapter 1, land of moon, never seen any from there.
Have some questions regarding Mana and Chakra but will complete the chapters and come back.