| Reviews for A Different Kind of War |
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   bdwilliams3 chapter 4 . 7/22 Love it! |
| Real List Tick chapter 4 . 7/21 The issue with the Draco moment is that it didn't fit in with the source material either. The series was terribly inconsistent in that way Unfortunately common when large teams of people write a book. Kind of depressing if JK actually did write the books single though. |
| ThingsCanBeTwoThings chapter 4 . 7/21 I really like some of your changes. In this chapter, I think Harry's decision making shows through a bit. He underestimates Draco and is appropriately punished. He's not yet vastly different from canon. I am curious about where the age thing is going though. |
| Narutohokage chapter 4 . 7/19 nice |
| FrostKing104 chapter 4 . 7/19 You do not disappoint! An amazing chapter, once again! |
| LifeIsAGreatAdventure chapter 3 . 7/19 Interesting reboot of what was already a very good story. I'm sure others have commented but whatever the arrangements made with the Minister are left totally undefined and the processs of negotiation utterly undescribed. Obviously negotiations of this sort would be something Harry would struggle with without Dumbledore's help and that process would have been interesting to see particularly since you say the Headmaster had been quiet. Hopefully you'll give us some sense of this process in future "reboot" chapters particularly since I think you showed us a little of this in the earlier version of the story. Thanks for your hard work on it in its earlier-and newer-forms. Looking forward to future installments. |
| bdwilliams3 chapter 1 . 7/19 Excellent! Excited to reread the new version! |
| plums chapter 4 . 7/19 Words/dialogue changes but you’ve essentially hit every major canon milestone. |
| Ordinarily Prudent chapter 4 . 7/19 Frankly, I would like Harry getting screwed something bad for the shit he pulls in this sequence. Most of ffs give him a pass for his master level incompetence. He has been using the cloak for years and still get caught by Malfoy just when things are seemingly getting serious. Raise the stakes a bit. HBP had a lot of set up, but Harry was disappointing to say the least. |
| ThingsCanBeTwoThings chapter 3 . 7/15 I already see some of the differences between this one and your previous attempt. I think this has potential to be much greater in scope. Excellent work! |
| Narutohokage chapter 3 . 7/14 nice chapter I am really enjoying your Fleur's personality you have this ability to give information and not bore me, whether by using the face expressions or body movement and it works Great job plz update quick ;D |
| The Corrupt Prefect chapter 3 . 7/13 Nice chapter! I'm curious as to what role the Goblins might play towards the future of the war this story. It will be interesting to see what Scrimgeour and Harry do towards neutralizing Voldemort. Keep up the good work! |
| Narutohokage chapter 1 . 7/13 nice start |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12 The Gringotts meeting was changed a bit and imo made better. Your attention to detail and describing the environment also really brings the story to life. Dialogue wise everything is crisp. Look forward to seeing more. |
| FrostKing104 chapter 3 . 7/11 I'm very, very happy with this. Your writing is like a river who's currents flow in such synchronization that you cannot escape after you've fallen in. Perhaps a bit morbid, but fitting, I think. I love your characterization and development. It feels like you did a great job of grasping the personality and stance of Harry Potter better than many others manage to do. I'm greatly looking forward to the next chapter. —Remaining, Frost, |
