I'm a sucker for drama and man, that's exactly what I got. Everything fit together perfectly and was very well written, I'm sorry for what you had to go through. This chapter was exactly a picture of perfect pain and trauma, very well done and respectful. Hiro, when the hallucination of the girl you like says that you need help appears, you listen! The boy is very stubborn indeed. And Tadashi here, I didn't expect it, which made everything better. And in the end, Karmi's mother has already become one of my favorite characters. The story was great!

Lamentó escuchar que has pasado por un mal momento en tu vida, espero que lo superes pronto, me encanta como escribes, me gusta muchísimo lo que has creado con estos personajes, por favor no te detengas.
Mi apoyo y cariño desde México

Welp, there goes my heart
thanks for killing me with feels

Very nice mini story

Nice, though I think you forgot to end this story since it’s not labeled as complete.

Omg whyyyyy. Good job keep it up

The chapter was amazing, everything with the cards was so cool, i want to have my fortune read now, and just to say, i also belive in all this in real life, i think i always have something in me that tell me, there is something of true in predictions and luck.

I can't wait to see the next chapter, good luck! :D

Good job keep it up

The fortune telling scene aaaaah I got chills!

Amazing story, can't wait to see the new chapter

Jajaja, things are getting a little bit "Strange", don't you think? Jajajaja.
I love that you put Doctor Strange inside your universe, and i love more that you are putting magic to all of this, your new story is awsome and i can't wait to see more! :D
Especially more KarmiHiro!
And pliss, you have to make Hiro mess with Honey Lemon and Fred that he just meet their future daughter, i would die laughing, pliss let me die like that, jajaja!
Good luck next chapter! :D

I love this! Hiro needs therapy, I always knew it, so thanks. Doctor Strange! I knew it, but Zelma was a surprise. The talk was A and so natural! Keep going!

I can't help hearing Benedict Cumberbatch's voice whenever I read the dialogue. And I'm loving it.

Oh my God, you brought in Doctor Strange?! I though you would only stick with the teen heroes of marvel but... wow. Just wow. Maybe you can discuss the trauma of being on the run from police and constantly worried about not being arrested. (Maybe not just for Hiro?) Also if you keep up with all this amazing writing I may just stop watching the show and just read your fan fiction exclusively

Poor Hiro, I hope he feels better soon! I am certainly not feeling better bc FEELS