Loved Abby's reaction to finding out Ziva was still alive.
I am glad the family went to DC to be with family.
Can't wait for the clan to come to DC permanently

Happy 4th weekend

I really liked how Abby yelled at Ziva first before getting all mushy and loving! I could see Abby passing back and fourth as she yelled at Ziva!

No points for characters (you really should stick to Abby stories), grammar, spelling, writing style, plot originality but a big gold star for persistence.

Why did you even bother to list the Tony and Ziva characters when you really have a story about Abby? And WHY are the kids playing with black snakes? Wild creatures are best left alone.

I stopped reading because of the spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation errors.

Spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors make this hard to read. Use a spelling and grammar check before posting.
VERY OOC for Ziva and Tony. Or is this an Abby story with TIVA thrown in to get readers?

Very sweet. Really enjoyed it

awwww

That was pretty good. Abby's reaction is understandable. I hope in the show they talk somebody into having a line mentioning that Abby's aware that Ziva's alive, since Perrette won't come back. There’s a few spelling mistakes, you really need to check your stories before posting chapters, make sure everything’s correct, that way you won't get bad reviews.