Ok I want the next chapter like yesterday please please pretty please

Really heavy duty. I hope that there will be some positives in the future chapters

That was intense!

OMG! WHY Poor Mac. I am so sad for him. And Jack. ugh dam you Murdoc. So you rescued Mac gave the team heads up about him. Only to come and find him again. Knowing he was basically useless-that he cant do anything. Why would you want him if he cant play your games of cat and mouse. NO there has to be something to help him. He cant die or be/get any worse.

Omg, that was terrifying and so well done! Poor boys! Can't wait to see what you do with this!
M

Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear! Trying to remember how to breathe! You are in the process of posting the next chapter, right?!

This chapter! Amazing! I was definitely holding my breath at the end there on the edge of my seat. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

OH MY GOODNESS HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME WITH THIS CLIFFHANGER!? YOU ARE KILLING ME! But seriously, this was SOOOO good. I literally can't... the plot twists... and Murdoc?! I did not see that coming! I have so many questions. And Jack— poor Jack. He's so strained. He's trying so hard and he's breaking. I love how you wrote the conversation between him and Matty. I could just feel the communication going on between then even though they weren't saying it outright. And the way Mac, at the end, was so accepting. He was so—well— so MAC. No matter he's gone through, he's still thinking of his team, willing to put himself in harms way to keep those he loves safe. This whole chapter just got me good. And seriously, I needed that reminder to breathe. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh wow. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

I'm loving this story; now a real heartache of a rift between father and son. I cannot wait for a new chapter!
M

Just like the chapters bevor - this one was intense. But the twist with Mac's father, that was not something I anticipated. I loved that Mac seems to make the first step to come back. I just hope that on the way Jack, Bozer or Charly get destroyed by the pressure and hurt they see. Truly looking forward to your next chapter.

OMG ! Ugh. Jim is an a**hole. Hiw cou m.j d ge do this to his own son. Deliver this poison to bad guys. Then have it be used on his son. Did he know it was going to be used like that. And once Jack finds out Jim better run and hide. So sweet when Mac offered the stuffed animal to Boz and then showed it to Ri.

oh my goodness this story us amazing! Everytime I get the notification that you've updated I drop everything that I'm doing to read it. Your writing is just sooooo good and you know exactly what details to focus on, and how to hit with the whump (bravo bravo). I can't wait for more. I can't remember If I reviewed chap. 4 already (I read it a while ago now and didn't review right away). Even if I did drop a previous review, this story deserves another! Love it and can't wait for Jack to find out what really happened and for more hurt/comfort/sad whumpiness. Thank you!

How dare you leave me with all of these emotions? I was Not Prepared for this and I need more. I need to know if (WHEN) they get Mac back, and how. Also can I just say I really love how you've included Charlie in this? He doesn't get nearly enough love. He knew Mac well, well enough to appear multiple times in the show and in the big thing with Mason. I ADORE my Strong Ladies, but I appreciate the boys' trip they're on. But for the love of every Writing God, PLEASE continue, I GOTTA KNOWWWWWW

Ah! I wonder if him getting scared in any way caused the seizure. Now they really need to get him to the hospital/Dr. to get checked out. Don't know if it better or worse that he is unconscious and thry take him to the hospital that way.