| Reviews for Is it Over, Clover? |
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dumas chapter 3 . 7/15 Cool idea to use, even if it's an hologram robot, Ulrich Wernestein again. He's an underrated vilain but I'm surprised to not see Tim Scam who was one of the earlier and recurrent foes of the Spies. Keep up your good work. :-) |
jettmanas chapter 3 . 7/15 Solid tension w/Mat and Sam dealing with the creatures. Clever idea of robots with hologram tech. Quite the language from Nick vs Genesis. XD Good line from Nozomi of a villain that actually learns from past mistakes. Ah, Millia- well, Guilty Gear Strive is on the way. :) Quite a variety with the fake villains, messing w/the spies' heads. Had to look up Lenore- she was tough. Lady Dragon was a nice one. Ha, Willard really is Britney's arch-villain. edit find: grab (an) Electromagnetic Nice wrapup to the adventure with defeating Crawley, the scene w/Jerry and Clover, and the fun back at the beach. |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 3 . 7/15 Cool stuff, guys, as always. Screeching morons? |
kevinbellemore chapter 3 . 7/15 Great story with a happy ending as always |
EverlastingEvanescence chapter 2 . 7/9 I do like your stories, but I have to tell you something that I've been thinking of for a while; I think you use too many OCs in your stories. Like, I think that unless they are absolutely essential to the story, you shouldn't overflow your story with OCs because I think it takes away from the characters that the story is actually about. |
jettmanas chapter 2 . 7/8 Good action & tension w/Haruka and Nick. Fun scene vs the henchmen. edit finds: uppercut to the chin. about (not) saying anything Nice info on Clover's status, then splitting the large group to reach various spots. Close call w/a creature and May. I liked the save for Clover and her thoughts. Alex's "Let's kick all the butts," was funny. Don't think I've heard that. Enjoyed the library, then beach trouble. What a monster- shielding the explosion was handy. Well done. :) |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 2 . 7/8 Love it. Legend of Zelda, huh? Cool. My brother was a huge fan of those games when he was younger. He probably still is a fan. The fountain bit reminds me of this video I saw. This couple in Ukraine are trying to get a wedding photo on top of a fountain, but they end up falling into it instead. |
kevinbellemore chapter 2 . 7/8 Not bad getting better |
dumas chapter 1 . 7/4 I think why Clover acted like that and I know the main vilain behind the culprit who manipulate Clover, it might be ones who still have grudge against Clover. |
jettmanas chapter 1 . 7/3 Quite the tension w/Clover's reaction to Jerry. I could see the Deja Cruise test of thinking they were drowning in a sinking ship causing an issue. The Fugitives was his lowest moment, thinking they robbed a bank & trying to put a chip in their brains. 0.0 Maybe it all built up! Fun mention of the upcoming concert. I liked the Basket Weaving, Surfology, and Advanced Physics- quite a difference. :) I'd forgotten that villain, though I remember Eraser well- Mandy's greatest moment. Two girlfriends apiece still gets me, ha. I don't blame Britney wondering about it. What a conflict w/Lester getting poor Nozomi- and nice save for Sam. Good one w/Alex being the most concerned for Clover. Solid fight scene, including teamwork. Fun cliffhanger. |
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 7/3 Nice work. Clover, you dummy!. Ugh, one of Nick's group is going through what Sam went through, oh, joy. |
kevinbellemore chapter 1 . 7/3 Boy that was so harsh wouldn't you say so? |