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Nomad98 chapter 11 . 6h Excellent chapter I do have one or two questions though is Logan's appearance based on Hugh Jackman in Logan and will we see him being the best he is at what he does? And who is Peter's ex wife and will she make an appearance in this story?. Keep up the good work man. |
Parker chapter 11 . 6h As this story goes on, I’m starting to hope that the main pairing will be swapped to Peter and Laura instead of Talia. Laura cares about Peter’s wellbeing through and through, while Talia sees him as the means to an end, despite how much she may argue otherwise. |
Parker chapter 11 . 10h As this story is progressing, I am hoping more and more for Laura to be the main pairing rather than Talia, cause Laura cares much more about Peter and his health than Talia, no matter how long Talia has known Peter. |
Creatureman chapter 4 . 8h .. |
Death Fury chapter 11 . 9h excellent chapter |
DarkDevilKnight chapter 11 . 10h So Peter was married? Now who would be crazy enough use to marry a guy who is starting to lose his mind I wonder. |
ethan.lukkar chapter 11 . 10h Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon |
Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 11 . 11h Okay, first off, I never said give him a “Universal power boost” or anything along those lines, you took me out of context there, just a decent one that would be a notch or 2 beyond symbiote-level would’ve been good, but fine, a simple “No” would’ve been fine for this story, jeez. As for the “Center of the Web” thing: in my defense, the Peter’s of your various stories are usually the Center’s most of the time, even if it isn’t pure Marvel, so please cut me some slack for assuming. Also, you’re not wrong about a good chunk of the Superhero community distrusting or disliking Batman and for good reasons, but the fact of the matter is that Batman is one of DC’s top 3 heroes and a founding member of the Justice League with his own merry band of followers (some of whom are well-connected to other heroes, like those in the Titans and Birds of Prey), and no matter how much they personally dislike him for various reasons, all heroes in DC at least acknowledge that Batman is among the best of the best and incredibly smart/observant and has a tendency of being right at least like 93% (give or take 4%) of the time, so if Batman told them something serious was gonna happen, especially something big and dark like this was gonna have repercussions for the world, they would probably listen regardless of any personal issues they have with him (ESPECIALLY since virtually no one in DC has the same expertise and experience with dealing with the League as Batman and his followers). Moving on to my actual critique of the story. First off, damn, did not expect Peter can manhandle yet attract Jade so well, or the fact that you had him sleep with Viper (that’s a crazy girl nobody would sleep with). And damn, maybe I overlooked the hints, but I did not see Natasha and Laura hooking up. And alright, Wolverine himself has made his grand debut and Talia is gonna get a lesson of why Logan’s the best at what he does if she pushes Peter and Laura the wrong way. Can’t wait to see what’s next. |
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 11h Good work! I must admit that when Cheshire was thinking of taking a nap before Psylocke contacted her, she DEFINITELY reminded me of a pet cat wanting to nap on a tree branch. Lol. |
FuryJoe chapter 11 . 11h great story |
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 11h Interesting! I like this start. Am I correct in assuming that the "thing" that was awakened inside Peter during all that has occurred, is something of a "darker side"? Something like the Hulk? Or maybe even an Inner Hollow like in Bleach? |
JCarrasco chapter 11 . 12h Keep it up I love this story please. |
Spawn Hades chapter 11 . 12h Heh. Logan 'paying' for something with the wrong currency seams just like him. Spot on! And his threat is definitely a Chekov's gun situation, so we've got Logan's return to look forward to. I wonder what Talia's gonna do that causes him to hunt her down? Holy fuck Peter's been married!? That's gonna be interesting to see explored. I wonder if she's still alive? Probably. I'd guess it was Jess Drew or Julia Carpenter with his comment about Spider Women a few chapters back. No doubt it likely ended poorly with his mental state the way it has been for however long. Great chapter, as always. It's cool to see you still consistently posting so many awesome, unique stories all these years later. Good day to you :D |
Jebest4781 chapter 11 . 12h this was quite good and wonder what else will occur next |
MCRasengan chapter 11 . 12h Wolverine cameo…nice. Wonder if Wade is out there anywhere…that’d probably cause a nice amount of chaos for all parties involved. |