Nice, very nice start. I wonder how you'll cure Alex in the end. This is going to be enjoyable.

Interesting start, although I think the beginning lines could use some slight adjustment. I don't know, it seems a little awkward. Looks good so far, though.

Nice chapter. Keep up the good work.

And then there's me watching what Alex is doing XD

I'm guessing Edward is the one Moira talks about: "You cut off his fucking hand?" or whatever she says.

I keep getting wazzock in my head instead, lol!

I'm really liking more of my sweet Alex :) I also like Gina helping out, but god damn it I hope you get rid of Neil, Pedro and the other one. It was easy to pass by your mistakes too XD

Looking good, very good. My sweet, sweet Alex needs a good ending, you best give her one or else!

Nice start. Keep up the good work.