| Reviews for Mind Arts Specialist |
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NinjaFang1331 chapter 1 . 7/17 Excellent first chapter thank you |
William the first chapter 1 . 7/15 If naruto ever is going to get legendary’s please give him either giratina or yveltal. |
ShadowPaladin23 chapter 1 . 7/15 Hope you update soon |
bkrockshard chapter 1 . 7/14 I'm happy to see this get a reboot, while a enjoyed the last version I was perplexed at the start when you had Kanto as his starting region considering its' lack of dark type, but I enjoyed the story elements and character relations. Personally I would like to see Naruto less arrogant and more confident, especially around those like Sasuke and Sakura. Give him the moral high ground instead of just being rude and angry. Otherwise, I am interested in seeing how this version of the story goes. Loved the inclusion of the beldum line; a personal favorite pokemon as I started pokemon in the Hoenn region with sapphire. |
drreaper chapter 1 . 7/10 this shit is fucking gourgous |
Gbds chapter 1 . 7/8 Great Chapter. The reboot is flowing more smoothly than the previous fic. |
Amaterasususano chapter 1 . 7/5 I like this I hope you will finish this and since naruto uses dark types have you thought about adding deino to his pokemon list since it is a dragon/dark type |
Sarcoisagoodboy chapter 1 . 7/5 I like this one |
swordsmanwielder chapter 1 . 7/4 Hey, just read the story, so I think naruto might gets a surprises visit from his aunt and uncle from both alola and galar regions to give him a gift or to spend time with him. Also, I guess they might tell stories of their journey in their respective regions. So, good luck on the next chapter. |
Pl chapter 1 . 7/4 Nick name of all Naruto pokemon And a list from the nicknames Ps:give him vulpix,alola vulpix,alola region pichu(evolve into alola raichu(psych and eletrick)). |
God of Wind 200 chapter 1 . 7/3 love this chapter keep it up |
SPark681 chapter 1 . 7/3 Hmm, so I wonder who was spying on Naruto and his team anyways keep up the great work! |
Piouspoppy41355 chapter 1 . 7/3 As a lot of other people said the beginning felt rushed but other than that was great! |
Corpse Candle chapter 1 . 7/3 Good start it’s good seeing the new take on the dark type master starting look forward to seeing what you do with this version |
kgarz01 chapter 1 . 7/3 Compared to your first story, this one seems wanting. The first chapter seems like a rushed summary compared to the details from the last story you wrote. I feel that you don't want to linger to long on what you've already written and feel that your past readers don't want to either, but you have to remember that any new readers you pick up will be lost and overwhelmed by the new pacing. |