Reviews for Relocated
UrBoiPedro12 chapter 20 . 7/23
Wonderful stuff. Liked the Sasuke scene a lot, and Gaara is likely going to die of overexposure to women. I wish him well. Great chapter
Pkmnwriter13 chapter 20 . 7/23
Here's ma boy, Duckbutt Uchiha himself! Legit though. Glad to see him. I hope we get some SasuOC action when the Chunin Exams arrive.
UrBoiPedro12 chapter 19 . 7/21
Kankuro cockblocking Gaara is still the best thing ever written, and you made it even better. ShikaTema is king as well. Great chapter
Mida570 chapter 16 . 7/20
Yo, i would like to say great work on the story, definitely one of my few favorites so far, really like the flow and humor behind it, and the way every bit is not forced to make sense. It's really refreshing.
P.S. i have made a sketch of Hinata's Sunagakure outfit inspired from your fanfic, since i couldn't send it to you directly, ill put it on Pinterest with the link to this page.
starfiction123 chapter 18 . 7/19
Ok you too the story and turned it into a masterpiece I'm not even gonna lie
UrBoiPedro12 chapter 18 . 7/19
Extremely cute. Liked it a lot. And Yugito is the greatest alongside Shikamaru
thor94 chapter 18 . 7/19
cute chapter and good battle.
But it is kinda boring to see that unlike hinata, naruto always use and train for the very same brute force moves (physical and clone spamming) or kyuubi power during battle like his manga self and never really learns something new.
Could you give him new skills and some of his parents talents and bloodlines (uzumaki level fuinjutsu, chakra chain, karin sensor ability and have his incredible chakra reserves put into more significant use than gorilla fight by making naruto an elemental jutsu prodigy, with him mastering dozen ninjutsu of several affinities andable to spam them).
Like you did for hinata you should also make naruto a strong and dangerous ninja mainly by himself on his own abilities and natural power and not because kyuubi, otherwise it would look like that most of naruto supposed achievements are in fact kyuubi one
iacopo.passerini chapter 18 . 7/19
Ottimo lavoro! Sei un razzo!
thor94 chapter 17 . 7/18
A question: Do you plan to use naruto for more significant reasons than naruhina cute scenes?
Because until now naruto did almost nothing important related to ninja.
Shikamaru has is cute romantic moment but also as gaara personal advisor look basically like the second in command in suna.
Hinata become pretty badass with new fire jutsu
But naruto barely improved and mostly train in the same stuff has his canon self (means kyuubi, kyuubi, maybe wind element and kyuubi, and that with only limited to no success).
Would like you plan naruto awaking some of his family perks and new skills (like become a fuinjutsu master prodigy creating his own scary universe laws bending and army killer seals that will surpass flying thunder god or edo tensei, adamantine chakra chains, new affinities, bloodline affinities, dojutsu, etc)
UrBoiPedro12 chapter 17 . 7/18
Well done for the fight scene. Nicely paced and everything. And yes, Gaara is a king
UrBoiPedro12 chapter 16 . 7/17
Yugito vs Konan. I should have written it the first time, but I trust you to do a great job.

Awesome chapter as a whole
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 7/17
Isn’t shikamaru treated well by his family/team?
Guest chapter 16 . 7/17
This fic is great. I love how Gaara is as kazekage xd
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 16 . 7/17
Great new chapter
vanhoenhiem10 chapter 2 . 7/16
Well I definitely like the idea of this story and the way it is executed in the couple of chapter . Still defection could be more realistic but overall looking forward for this story.
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