Wow! You updated so fast! Thank you! Lochlan's obtrusiveness really pissed me off. He kept jumping around the topic and if I was Sarah I would have been very pissed at him for 2 reasons. A. Because he did not adequately warn her before having her choose between her life or her father's (Im sure her father would rather die than his daughter enter into an abusive relationship...) And B. Because he's STILL keeping her in the dark about clarifying what "Jareth is violent" actually means (as well as what Jareth's research is). You'd think Sarah would ask for an example. Is it violent as in throwing books around in a childish temper tantrum? Is it violent as in he'll smack her across the face? (If so, then I would tell Lochlan that I never want to see him again and whatever friendship was beginning to develop over our journey has now been completely destroyed because apparently he never really cared if Sarah got hurt or not).

I think she had the G*d-d**n right to know what she's getting into.
I'm glad you updated but I'm upset that theres no Jareth. Pleaze dont make the next chapter just a "Long journey through the Labyrinth to get to his castle" and then at the very end "Viola! Jareth is there!". Since they're on the island they better be able to magic themselves to the castle, lol.

Excited for another update!

Noooo, don't wait another week! You should post this weekend! I need some self indulgence time before going back to teaching for the semester! Lol

But really, I'm loving the story. I'm so interested about their first meeting and I have a feeling that everything they're hinting at with Jareth's moods and "studying" is somehow a curse? Am I close? Haha

Such a cliff hanger. What a great final line, i cant wait for chapter 5.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Meanie!

*dies from waiting*

Devo mencionar que agora, até eu fiquei com medo de Jereth. Que tipo de maluco ele se tornou?

I am so excited for the next chapter. I cannot wait to see their meeting and how they interact. Love this chapter. I really like Lochlan so far.

AH! This was lovely. Also, Sarah seems to have slipped up with the whole inbibe-and-you-can-never-leave business...Oh boy. On to the castle!

Oh good lord. As tense as the meeting was, I’m have serious anxiety over her food situation. Lol. Love this story.

...so, has Sarah given up on going back? I thought the ban was on both drink and food, or is it only on food? or did they both get careless?

and curioser and curioser on this whole business with Jareth and fits of violence and not being able to come home til he learns his lesson.

cause we all know they were using Royal Fae speak to mean exactly that.

Bardzo proszę, tydzień to tak długo, miej ten gest i wrzuć aktualizację. Będę w napięciu zagryzać paznokcie aż się oboje spotkają

I love it! Great first 3 chapters! Your style of writing is very unique. I can't wait to read your next chapter. Are you almost done with it?

My dear Author, you have been blessed with a bountiful imagination. Lucky us, who get to lose ourselves in your carefully-crafted, intensely vivid worlds. Thank you for taking so much care of the 'Labyrinth's' legacy. Reading more from you is a pleasure. Maybe the goblin will take me away for this but I *wish* inspiration will come at you wave after wave.

Capítulo sensacional! De acordo com as insinuações dos pais, Jareth parece ter se tornado um bastardo indisciplinado. Talvez agressivo, sádico? Mal posso esperar para esse encontro! hahahaha

I looooove this new story! I’m not surprised though, you haven’t written a story yet that I didn’t love. I can’t wait for them to meet in person! I hope we get a new chapter soon :)

I love this so much it hurts. You are truly gifted in storytelling. Meeting the parents was just...perfect!