Why do you go out of your way to make him seem weak

What horrible sin has he committed though, I mean it really just sounds like a lazy excuse to wear the suit. I mean don’t say reborn he exactly the same so far.

Another thing never invest to much into individual villains, pace it make it moderately long but not five individual chapters long. As far as I can tell spider man reborn is the wrong name cause he’s not reborn it’s just spider man but swap Ben for May. I can’t even tell if your just combining all the movies together or going off the comics.

For future reference put a line or caption saying scene break when your changing scenes.

Jesus Christ what did I just witness? Look normaly I take my time and read through the fic but this time Im making an exception.
Why in God's name does Peter feel guilty about telling Mary Jane the truth? Is he retarded or why is he even putting up with MJ's crap? So to make it clear right, MJ shows affection for Peter, is there for him when his Aunt dies, but decides to just simply go and date his Nemesis. And her own explanation for that is probably because he wouldn't understand her circurmstances, or feels that she doesn't deserve Peter for some reason, but instead of trying to hold a certain distance decides to get after his ass. Best part is that she has the gall to tell him that Gwen is bad for him, even tho her friends said that she would also be bad for Peter. Even tho she decided it would be a wondrous idea to date the bully of the boy she loves...even tho after witnessing him trying to move on, her first reaction is to doubt their relationship( or is it friendship or what the hell are they even?)? Yeah you have no clue how to write Mary Jane or even establish her Character traits. She really is hollow, which is funny because the other main love interest (Gwen Stacy) is also hollow af.
Peter should have stayed strong because he was godamnd right. MJ just spitting crap and playing the victim as well as guilty card on Peter. Can't believe he even went as far as to apologised to her, furthermore also dropped Gwen and pretty much used her for his own benefit. This whole situation just feels god damn wrong...

So tired of Mary Jane. She can say whatever she wants about other people, but when someone sends a retort her way it's suddenly "oh, woe is me." Peter is pathetic as well; always running back and groveling. He has no pride whatsoever.

Good

Just a word of advice, go through the chapters and add something that shows that you are changing the POV because it’s kinda hard to tell who’s perspective I’m looking at

Are you kidding me? I mean I've enjoyed the story, but Kraven is absolute fodder compared to Symbiote Spider-Man. Also Spidey can dodge bullets from like a foot away, he would almost never be in a position where a crossbow bolt could actually hit him. Alright rant over.

That... That, was one of the most bittersweet endings I've ever read.

I know that you won't ever see any of the reviews I've left on this story, seeing as you've been gone for more than 10 years, but I want you to know that I won't ever forget this particular fic. No, not ever...

Despite all the deaths, the deaths of all the Avengers, Aunt May, Uncle Ben, Gwen and so many more, in a way, this is one of the few rare pieces of work that will leave you thinking for a long, long while. And the ending in particular will always be lingering at the back of my mind...
Thank you, for weaving us a tale that we'll never forget!

Goodbye, Green Goblin...

Oh... Oh...

You... You...
You killed off every single one of the Avengers, Nick Fury, Aunt May and Uncle Ben.

Why?!

WHAHOOOOOOOOOOO! This is LONG overdue! Even in the comics, Spider-Man always had the support of the public. Up to this point I had considered to stop reading this due to the all the trouble and depression surrounding this focus due to all the negative from the police and the public, most of which began due to Venom! Thank goodness that they've begun to accept him for who he is, a HERO!

I thought he was daredevil!