look fun but strange writing style (why add script stuff for naruto sentences when the story is from his POV at first person, it is too much weird)
Also how the headmaster could know naruto is the juubi when they are not even from the same universe?

Awesome chapter keep it up

No harem plz!

Just letting you know writing a story like this can get it taking down it against their guidelines and their are plenty of assholes out there that would report this so you should really change the format

Harem harem harem harem. Give his godliness a harem and then turn he immortal too

Oh man I hope this becomes a food harem or something. I mean he made erina cum with his food something souma nor his dad could do.

Are you writing Fanfic or Movie Script?

I’m sorry, but someone should say it. Dude, delete this story now and rewrite it when you’re better prepared.

You’re way of writing is all wrong. Where have you seen anyone who writes like this. Nowhere, because nobody writes like this. Seriously, read other fanfics and be honest with yourself. Would actually say your story is good?

I’m sorry if I’m being rude, but it’s called being honest and honesty is the truth. As the saying goes, the true hurts. Honestly, delete this and your first one and don’t write again until you can write with quality like you’re writing a book and not a scripted text.

Best fic ever :v