I'm glad Iroh won, he's a very refreshing figure to have as a familiar. I love stories where her familiar actually teaches her important lessons, and Iroh is absolutely fantastic for that. Very much looking forward to seeing more from this one, keep up the good work.

Was re-reading this story which I still love with all your other works but I noticed a few problems which I don’t mind completely but thought to just say them. When you wrote iroh saying he hadn’t even finished his tea yet when he was asked to move inside I thought it was weird because you didn’t describe him having a cup of tea as he was summoned could have said “you haven’t even offered me any tea yet” and feel a bit more natural

Another bit that bugged me was in the end while Louise was describing iroh she said he was a commoner and a mage like it wasn’t a big deal and without him using any fire-bending or magic to give that away

Other then those little bits I love this story and I honesty can’t wait for the newest chapter in a few days hopefully

Honestly really interesting Idea. I want to see where this is going cause it has me in giggles and I'm only thinking about it.

Ok I’m interested. Though I’m honestly sad that so little progress happened despite how long this chapter is.

I liked the story w with Aang summoning, but this one I love. If it was up to a vote, I'd've voted for Iroh.
Zuko-Iroh dynamics were good in ATLA, and since Louise and Zuko have a lot in common, it should be good here too. Except there is no reason for him to subtly sabotage her at every step.

A bit disappointed to hear Aang's story slot will be shared here, but this is at least shaping up to be interesting

This chapter is good if predictable, it's the first chater after all but Iroh is a really interesting choice with a lot of potential and as old mentors characters is one of my favourites.
I mean can you imagine DB's Master Roshi and the cringe he can get to with Kirche or Louise's panties?

You are a fan of runeterra

I don’t mind your writing schedule. I find most of your works entertaining enough to read, so to have something to read every week is quite a delicious snack I’m looking forward to.

This was really good hope to see more soon

So this shares a slot with Aang being summoned?

Down with the Avatar! Long Live Iroh! Down with the Avatar! Long Live Iroh! Down with the Avatar! Long Live Iroh!

Now that my bias is clear, I'll say that I like both stories, even if Iroh's will be more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next in both.

you got me intrigued

Disappointing. Iroh was way too subservient. OOC.
Why do FoZ authors keep glorifying slavery and rape (mind rape IS rape) anyway?
'Louise summons Malcolm X'
-Will he too be acting like a house negro?
'Louise summons Sasuke'
-Still 'yes massa! ok massa!'?
'Louise summons Vegeta'
-how about now?

Awesome, we got Iroh! Finally! I have veen following your posts on Spacebattles. And my next vote is for the American Dragon.

I see potential not sure if its bad or good i am neutral right now but this could become a good story :)