| Reviews for A Willing Self-Insert |
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   AnimeA55Kicker chapter 3 . 7/17 I would have liked to see Legolas and Lyanna interact before they were betrothed. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14 Having a spelling mistake in the summary is bad. |
| Savoled chapter 6 . 7/15 Meh, dropped. Sorry this is not for me. Good luck tho. |
| Savoled chapter 5 . 7/15 Trash, this chapter is pure trash in written form. Thanks for the warning at the start, hope the next one is better. |
| Savoled chapter 4 . 7/15 Glad a was mostly skipping this chapter, hope I dont read something like this again but I will not hold my breath. *sigh* |
| Little Liar chapter 12 . 7/12 Okay. |
| Jon Snow chapter 10 . 7/12 I want the dreamers sight too. |
| Jon Snow chapter 9 . 7/12 I like music. |
| Jon Snow chapter 8 . 7/12 Lyanna is selfish. |
| Euron chapter 7 . 7/12 Monster Spawner 2.0? Haha. |
| Willson18 chapter 12 . 7/14 Good story hopefully it can be continued |
| SkyLime2212 chapter 5 . 7/14 funny? no.. its annoying.. its just too much.. |
| Korst chapter 7 . 7/12 Dude/dudette, you need to warn people when your story is straight crack, because the first there chapters gave me the misunderstand that this'd be a serious story. Now I can't help but think about what could've been and what we got instead. Sorry, but I can't keep reading this. |
| Korst chapter 6 . 7/12 Yea... nope, you had a good thing going on and you've thoroughly ruined it. Your credibility if shot and you readers can't rely on you not pulling another fast one on them anymore. Really if you wanted to do something like that you should have led into it instead of doing a one-eighty from serious story yo crack cocaine mixed with a bad acid trip while whiffing paint fumes. Instead of leading up to it and giving some hint about your story being stupi- ugh, I mean 'funny', you took a shit, called it chocolate, and drop it in your readers laps. Also if you wanted to use the fact the man is gay against him, then there are a million way you could do than. Also WEARING A PINK DRESS DOES NOT MAKE YOU GAY. It's a bit weird, but doing it doesn't mean you're gay. Liking it might mean you're a bit trans or gender neutral or the like, but not specifically gay. Hell the protag walking in on the guy as he goes down on another guy is actual blackmail worthy, and also a likely possibility; at least it's more likely than everything that happened at the end of chapter 4, during the entirety of chapter five, and for most of chapter 6. Suffice is to say, you went full retard with chapter 5. Never go full retard, and yes I am quoting a movie; doesn't make me not right. |
| Korst chapter 5 . 7/12 You got bored, plain and simple. I refuse to recognize this is an actual chapter. Good thing it's apparently optional because even if it wasn't, I'd reject your reality and substitute my own. My reality has hookers and booze, it's way cooler. |
