Simply amazing...

You really didn't know the show when you wrote this fic (LOL). Its awesome writing, but you do need to know the characters a little better. Ephram would probably not do something like that. Its too sopntanious for him. But keep the writing up. And another think that jumped out at me at first, the title is snow day. I suppose anyone would know better than me, considering I'm form southern California and never see snow, but when I here snow I think of a day you are dismissed from school because of the weather. If this sounds completley stupid, please disregard it, but that is what i immediently thought of.

This is good please continue!

Aw... short and sweet. you really captured the moment. good job.