I liked the challenge and yeah I can see chris enjoying avatar. Heck I can see most people enjoying it so no surprises there. I
God chapter and I enjoyed how dawncoln is going.

I think that Lincoln Loud just got laid

Huh. I thought kissing was first base, making out is second and sex is third. Didn't know there was a home base.

Looks like first base ain't that far off~

Poor DJ. He was slow tho

nice job with the original episode: loved the references, seeing how everyone handled the challenge, and seeing how "Dawncoln" progresses; can't wait to see if the next original episode will be just as good :D

Nice chapter.
So... the next one is also an original challenge.

Alright here is a brief way I would book this. Lincoln screws heather over in the next episode. Leshawna goes nex in trial by tri-armed triathlon. Then in haute-Camp-ture, In the vote everybody accidentally votes gwen until heather relizes what chris is doing and screws Lincoln over (getting back at Lincoln from Venti go nuts ) . Then Duncan goes in Are we there yeti? Then gwen goes in i triple dog dare you. And Dawn wins in the finale. I do not see Lincoln winning here. Just thought id share.

Good chapter, I guess Lincoln and Dawn have now taken their relationship to the next level. Also, I never watched Survivor, but you handled this challenge well, and can't wait to see the next one.

So, are you going to do the Playa de Losers episode? Cause it would be interesting if everyone went with someone else instead of Leshawna when they accidently voted for her.

Only a challenge similar to Naked and Afraid would be crazier than what I've seen so far in the story. But Chris isn't that insane... Right?

Okay, that is some serious anime fanservice stuff right there! I'm just imagining the reactions of the Loud family watching that back home and something tells me they would all be pretty shocked! XD I have to say, though, I never really imagined Dawn as the type to get so frisky based on just her appearance in the actual show. Not complaining, though.

This challenge was really creative and fun to read. I love all the different obstacles you came up with for each of the zones based on each of the elements. And I was kinda sad to see DJ get the boot, even though I kind of expected it with the way he was going through the maze. If the next challenge is another original one, then I'm really excited to see what happens. I wonder how long this trend of Dawn and Lincoln winning invincibility can last?

I love the story so far but I have a question are you planning on doing more Total Drama shows or are you stopping the story after Island?

I never really liked the next few seasons, even TDA and TDWT. I actually want this story to have a happy ending where Lincoln and Dawn win, share the money with each other especially so Dawn can donate it to help Mother Nature, and go home where Dawn meets the Loud family!

I think the more perverted moments were a bit much here, but otherwise the chapter was pretty good.

Nice challenge! And great Dawncoln content!

Nice Avatar reference

Would’ve been better if someone in the group was silently speaking the intro of Avatar or made references, like they enter the Fire Zone and say something like, “The Fire Nation has come to attack” or something

Well... the age of consent in Canada and Michigan is sixteen and up, so... ;)

J-just not on public television, of course!