| Reviews for The Embers of Rebellion |
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TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 8 . 7/10 So the heist happened way earlier with Sumire's intervention, huh? Also, pretty neat take on how the canon brutal change of heart happens. And would Takuto show up after this arc? |
Beemerz chapter 3 . 7/9 This is really interesting, I’ve seen a lot of NG stories recently but none where everyone else remembers except joker, very cool and a great way to differentiate your story from the others. I’m only on chapter 3 right now so I hope I’m not jumping the gun saying this, but I really hope Ren doesn’t take a backseat to the rest of the characters, he’s got some major depth in this story and you can really take advantage of that with the way the Thieves deal with they’re guilt with him, but then again, this is YOUR story and I’m looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Thanks for posting! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6 Slight correction, Ren isn't a fool he's an idiot |
TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 6 . 7/5 Well, this is quite an interestingly complicated time traveler battle. Also, the concept of the natural, so to speak, sort of mental shutdown or psychotic breakdown you're working up here is particularly interesting! Same goes for Kobayakawa having a Palace. |
UltimateReader123 chapter 3 . 7/4 Interesting idea, though I'm a bit curious as to how Sumire remembered her true self, since she was still believing that she was Kasumi during the God of Control arc. |
CaptainKidd02 chapter 5 . 7/3 intriguing, can't wait for the next chapter |