just started your story & i love it. Is Sarah an ex-agent or did Graham never found her he arrested Jack?

Well I liked this chapter but a couple of thoughts. You might explain in the updates but why is Chuck having such a hard time with this intersect. The other intersects in the other stories or series, he gets headaches and needs a governor but in this one it really bothers him physically. Another thing, what’s Sarah’s background. What is her job now today and why did she leave D.C. what job did she do D.C. . You might have mentioned it but all I remember is when she was younger she coned with her father and he might be still in prison but what did she do after she split from him and what she did moving to Burbank? Great job, great chapter, great story and thanks for all your hard work.

Casey has a point. Sarah shouldn't be trusted to stay complacent and do exactly what the Feds want. Ellie can't be trusted that way either, but they don't know that. This willl be interesting.

Very interesting portrayal of Casey. You’ve got a fair amount of tension here that is so different from canon, it will be interesting to see things play out.

Great chapter. Really loved it and I can't wait for more. Thank you for sharing this with us

love charah! liked Casey standing up for Chuck! love the humor in this story and certainly cannot wait for the reveal to Ellie and her reaction!

Ok Casey definitely has a soft spot for Chuck and I’m liking it a lot. Casey being in charge of the asset and so far little CIA interaction is a nice spin. Cool that Ellie will get to know what is happening, looking forward to that. Can’t imagine Chuck will keep this from Sarah for long. Definitely wanting to see more story play out. Thanks for sharing.

Don’t think Chuck is gonna handling lying to Sarah very well, so interested to see how this plays out. Though Sarah still has a secretive past, it’s nice to see her so generally upbeat and rather apparent with her emotions. Casey is still Casey but maybe a touch more respect right off the bat for what’s in Chuck’s head. The Intersect is quite painful for Chuck, should be interesting how he tries to keep it from Sarah Ellie and others if the flashes remain so debilitating. Thanks for the update.

OK, I like it so far but I hope Sarah is going to be awesome and be mommy bear to protect Chuck. Great job, great chapter and thanks for all your hard work.

I don’t remember if I reviewed already or not but great job, great chapter, great story, and thanks.

Very interesting story and character development.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm liking this. Interesting variations from canon. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Keep up the good work.

Definitely an intriguing start for this AU. Although this Sarah seems pretty shockingly weak. Excellent intro for Casey however.

Great chapter. I really enjoyed it. I really love how chuck and sarah are already together. Amazing story and I cant wait for what happens next. Thank you so much for sharing this with us

I really like the relationship between Sarah and Zondra, it definitely adds a different dynamic to the traditional story and I wonder if you will continue with this. It seems like Zondra is taking on Sarah's traditional role in this story with her own set of baggage. I really like the fact that Sarah and Chuck are already in a relationship, hopefully no WT/WT in this story. Casey seems a bit different here too, in a good kind of way, I hope it all works out well. Finally, the Intersect seems to be taking out much more from Chuck, not sure if that's intentional or not.