I could have sworn I followed this.

Thanks for the story! It's been quite enjoyable so far, I look forward to more

just have to say - mma is mixed martial arts not multi martial arts

I could see yang using this as an opportunity to not just help jaune but blaje and herself as well. By distracting blake giving her a mini mission to sneakily turn all of jaune’s pants into short shorts not booty shorts but usmc style silkies.

"It was these moments that made Pyrrha want Jaune Arc to be her destiny."
Not gonna lie, I kinda cringed at that. I was never a fan of the "destiny" trope in stories

this is good

Honestly I always thought that Pyrrha’s crush on Jaune is incredibly shallow, or at least portrayed that way. Her reason for liking him is that he didn’t know who she was. That’s why I’m not normally a fan of Arkos. The fact that Yang is getting to know Jaune before developing feelings makes it feel far better than with Pyrrha.

So happy to see an update for this. I support all RWBY ships unless they are gross or incesty or something (stay kind, honor others opinions and keep the FNDM clean!), but there are some I do like more than others. Dragonslayer's one of them. The idea of the goofy guy and the girl who's literally and figuratively hot and way out of his league falling for each other is just so SWEET !

I kind of like jealous Pyrrha here. It's interesting.

Was just reading this new chapter then gave your name a second look, just realized your username was a reference to Warframe Hahahahahaha. Glad you're updating this story OP, looks real nice so far.

This is great! I've been waiting for an update

Yes that's good pacing and progress. Noice

So nice to see this updated. I really loved the differences between how Pyrrha trains Jaune and how Yang trains Jaune. I'm also loving Pyrrha's jealousy, then again that might come from the fact that I'm really not a huge fan of Arkos. I'm really looking forward to more of this story.

Is ruby eventually going to see what’s going on and root for her first beacon friend and potentially her most loyal friend getting together with her sister potentially making him what amounts to a brother to ruby. I could see Nora and ruby playfully butting heads over this (i dig secondary Focus Comedy)

DuDES WeARİnG MEtAl ARmoUR ThAT'll SLoW HiM DoWN ToO MuCh

Oh God, I think I just lost a good chunk of my brain cells just reading that line.

Can't wait to see more of this.