It's my own personal head Canon that Mistoffelees was watching ,I always thought Mistoffelees also had a really sad backstory,like worse than Grizabella and Victoria ,I'm not going to tell what it is.

The interaction back stage between Gus and Misto is one of my absolute favorite moments in the movie, so I'm glad you gave us some of that. You missed my very favorite bit, though. Gus says, "Touch wood," and then rubs his head on the post, which is so funny because that would be the equivallent of humans "touching wood" by touching it with our fingers. And then Misto has to do it too, because he's so star-struck. Cute! But you did really well with this one too. Aaannnddd...another little Munktoria moment there, watching Gus together. Hm.

Another very nice summary. I love Victoria's new song, and I love how Frankie sang it, tentatively and almost crying. I think it was perfect. I'm glad you have Misto looking out for her. It always bothered me that he just suddenly wasn't with her after they danced together like that. This makes much more sense, and its so sweet that he wants to hold her and protect her. Nice moment with Old D, too.

Aw, now this was nice. I like that Victoria is admitting to being unsure of the steps but was pulled in automatically. Love the little Munktoria dance moments. I never would have thought of them together until this movie, but I kind-of can't help it with these two. The added dialogue from Mungojerrie and Mistoffelees added so much. I love Misto's musings about being so shy, and that he actually did manage to ask her to dance. Sweet!

Maybe when Grizabella is singing Memory and Victoria is singing Beautiful Ghosts you can have Mistofelees listen in and feel sorrow for both of them.

And maybe when Bombalurina shows up You can have the feel mixed emotions of anger and heartbreak like Demeter losing a cat who used to be her best friend along with Cassandra. Or Tugger losing the one cat he may have had genuine feelings for.

I don't actually mind the gender switch with Old D, but I do really miss the duet of Munk amd Tugger singing about their dad (mom...) together. That whole brother dynamic is one of my favorite little bits in the musical.

You summarized the scenes well, but I wish you had gone a little more into Victoria and Mistofelees' thoughts about each other after the rescue from the dog. You missed Victoria's hopeful, "You have?" when he says he was looking all over for her. I think that shows her feelings for him, that she was glad he wanted to find her, just after she had felt so abandoned twice. And he so quickly and shyly covered up by saying he was worried she'd miss the arrival of Old D, but clearly he was really just worried about her. They are so cute together in this movie, even if it isn't the "standard" pairing.

These chapters are great! I can't wait for the next chapter where Mistoffelees saves write from both their point of views!

What happens next one

Cute story. I'm enjoying it.

You should definitely keep writing from Mistoffelees's point of view.I love how protective he is over Victoria and that Munkustrap is giving him advice about definitely learned her lesson about Tugger.

This is really good! And the extra dialogue makes total sense.