Thank you for letting me know about your story. I'm excited to see where you take it! I already like how you wove the "surprise" theme throughout, and any story with Nancy Shepherd is always a plus in my book.

This is amazing! I'm really excited to see how the fact that she's pregnant will affect Derek's decision between Addie and Mer. Keep writing 3

Thanks for mentioning this story to me. It's off to a great start! Looking forward to seeing how you expand upon this plotline!

Hi there, I'm usually very hesitant when I read summaries of fics where it is announced that there will be an Addek baby.

1.) This idea has been done to death.

2.) The majority of the fics end with Addek having a daughter. Boring.

3.) The story-plot itsself is often similar to many many others. Less original.

I honestly don't know why I decided to read your fic, but I have to say that I'm glad that I DID read your fic.

I have the feeling that this story might be more original than many other "baby stories" I've read about Addek. Maybe I'm right, maybe I'm wrong.

Suggestions? At the end of the day it is your story and you decide how it will play out. I think one of my suggestions would be that the baby is not a girl for a change. I can guarentee you that you would be among the maybe 5% who choose that path. The "remaining" 95% are always daughters. You would go up high in the "originality department." Your story would be less clichee.

I can't wait to read more. You are doing a fantastic job considering that this your first fic.

Congrats and welcome to this homepage. :)

lovely start! i can't wait to see more.