Awesome update!

Loving these updates! It's my first fanfic with Hermione and the marauders and it's brilliant. Just want to wrap lupin up in a hug!

Please don't increase the rating. I would be sad to stop reading it.

Some of the way people talk is a bit stilted.
I really like the concept.
Is Hermione going to also become an animagus to accompany Remus when he's Moony?

I must admit, I was snickering quite a lot at the description of James and Peter sparkling.

It brightened my day so thank.

It was also highly entertaining to see a Slytherin cowering when faced with Remus/Moony.

I certainly look forward to seeing what cover story you've created :D

Amazing!

Fabulous! I was so curious what happened with Sirius right after he got kicked out of the ward. I know you said you wanted to not back track so much when it came to rehash a moment or scene from another perspective. I just want to let you know it was perfect how you wrote about Sirius’ mind running over what had happen as he wandered about the next night. Enough details to clearly picture what happened while moving the story along at the pace you want. I’m not sure if it was a concern or not of yours but I truly feel like you should know just how fantastic I feel your writing is.

Also enjoy the reasoning behind Sirius avoiding James and Peter. Being so loyal and not wanting there to be any secrets that avoiding is the best option, it just seems so perfectly Sirius decision to make. And Remus deciding another prank to do to James and Peter to throw them off on why neither boy saw Sirius or Remus for the day, brilliant!

Already have me wanting to smack future death eater in the face. Stupid Rookwood you aren’t anything special. Though you now have me curious on how Remus’ little protective moment will play out once Rookwood leaves the infirmary. Will he talk about what happened and the rumor mill take off? Will he have a sudden fear of Remus and avoid him like the plague? Or will he have a death wish and try and do something to Hermione?

I can’t wait to see what the cover story they come up with! With her name now being Lupin, I just have more questions and theories of what you might do.

I was about to hit post when this question hit me! Will Snape still go through the whomping willow after Sirius sends him?! That did take place their sixth year near the end correct? I’m not sure at the moment but with Hermione being there now, that can obviously change.

Poor Sirius - I can just picture him walking around the halls like the lost puppy he is because he doesn't know how to lie ot his best friends lol - hopefully he won't have to for much longer.
Also the 'Sparkles' is hilarious I love that. Super curious as to what cover story they come up with for Hermione - guessing the whoel Lupin connection is going to be difficultto explain. But again a great chapter - I can't wait to see where this goes.

Oh I love this! Sparkes! And I love how supportive a friend Sirius is and how award he is that he’s shit at keeping secrets so he took precautions against that, I really love this story and am looking forward to seeing what her cover will be!

Off to a good start.

More please

Brilliant chapter! It’s nice seeing them bonding and just focusing on themselves right now. Cover stories can come later once you truly know a person. Also I enjoyed how you can already see the support building between them.

When Dumbledore said he warded the infirmary to stop anyone from coming in unless they’re hurt. I couldn’t help but picture a montage of Sirius, James and Peter doing odd and stupid ways to get in between classes or whatever they’re supposed to be doing. If they’re not skipping that is.

Enjoyable as always, thank you!

Simply lovely. I really hope we get to see a "mama bear" James. Possibly a French speaking duo of Hermione and Sirius? Also I really want to see a over the top drama queen in public Sirius, but a soft queit romantic slightly insecure in private Sirius. xoxo

This is interesting. I wonder if the cover should be she’s his cousin or something. But I can’t imagine her going home with him for the holidays, that would be 2 more people who have to know. Look forward to how you deal with that.

Great as usual! I’m looking forward to moving on to the relationships and the cover story! Will Remus’s parents get involved? Please continue updating this, I like how unique it is :)