nice job you did there. and you are right about many of the characters not having much atention in the show, and in many other shows as well. and you know, i happen to have an intrest in rare pairings, though Marco x Sabrina is rare i do find it more common compaired to the others. and while i do wish for you're Gravity Falls fanfic to continue as soon as possible, it would be intresting to see a Marco x Brittney fic at some point as despite there very clear dislike for each other it would be intresting to see with Brittney claiming Marco as hers, but thats up to you.

Oh man this was so romantic I kind of wished that Sabrina actually had feelings for Marco in the actual show. Plus the sexy fun was so sweet!

I liked you story very much.

Sabrina was such a underused character, I'm glad she got treated right in this story.

She fell for him in all ways