I'm halfway through chapter 1 and all i can say is this fic is confusing as fuck. There is not really any backstory at all which would be fine if you wanted to do flashbacks or whatever. But the more annoying thing is there is no details to describe references to what i assume is bleach. And as someone who doesn't watched much bleach, the way the combat is written here is abysmal, i have no idea wtf is going on, and then out of a sudden oh mitsumi wins, and btw so far this is more of a mituomi or whatever fic then a naruto fic.

You have written pretty much a crossover story except given no explanation to how any of it works.

this is much better nice work.

Naruto ntr ino confront of sasuke just to prove how inferior sasuke is just before ino dies. Or whatever.

You really worked hard on your story bro.6 Chapter and already 85k. Keep it up buddy!...Hope to see more and stay safe.

Hope to see more.

Thankyou.

very interesting but I am wondering who is in the harem I hope Tayuya is coming back and she is paired with Naruto and I also hope Samui will be among his girls as well could we see Ameyuri brought back to life to join him maybe Yugito joins him I am hoping Kushina ends up on Naruto's side when its time to eliminate Konoha completely

More ... Hope you update fast!

I hope Sakura joins Naruto and gets revenge on Ino

About that ending note I'm a bit confused, so Tenten and Fu will stay humans meaning both are out of the harem or is that just Fu since she sees Naruto as a brother? I still want to see Tenten part of the harem

its been a while since i read the original from what i remember this reboot is looking great i ope shizune doesn't suffer the same fate as tenten did in the original in chapter 1 i noticed you called shizune tenten guessing that's an error from rewriting this but besides that looking good only thing i hope for is tayuya to still be in this story got to love the spitfire that she is looking forward to see were you take and change this story

I thought that the spy would be Kurenai

Knowing Fu's usual setting, it wouldn't be a surprise that she was to accept to turn in a vampire

I knew Konoha is evil, pure evil to the core and they'll never stop until the world is in despair.

So is the plan for the story that the former Naruto will use his Dark Chaotic magic to revive Hinata and either convert her as a Draclinia or as his human wife?