This is such an interesting story idea. It’s rare finding a story that contains Wanda’s and Blonda’s mom. I have been around for a really long time (don’t let the new account fool you) and I don’t believe I’ve ever come across a story centering around her. I’m interested to see where this goes and hope you decide to continue.

I have been following your stories for quite some time and to be honest, it’s getting complicated keeping my interest. I don’t understand why you keep changing the titles, plot, etc. I’m gonna have to drop these stories. To prevent further loss, I recommend making up your mind about an idea before uploading a story and sticking with one idea to keep the story flowing, instead of constantly changing your mind. Also it’s Hiatus not Hiatsu.

I’m going to be very honest here. I think you have amazing story ideas and great potential as a writer. I have noticed some common writing mistakes, though and while they are minor, it could really improve your viewership if you worked on it. For example; when you write dialogue and follow up with a dialogue tag, always end the dialogue with a comma (unless it’s a question, then you would end it with a question mark).

Ex: “I don’t have time for this,” she said.

Another thing is to break up your dialogue from the paragraphs. It’ll make the story more clean and easier to read.

Ex of dialogue/paragraph breaks (taken from CH. 2)

“Quiet, Wanda. Sometimes I wish you were more like your sister.”

“You have yo idea,” Wanda muttered.

Wanda kept glancing at her twin sister, who was silent and cold.

“Just be yourself, Blonda,” she said to her sister, as a long subsided fear arose within her.

Blonda didn’t respond. She only moved on her mother’s command. There was something wrong with her and Wanda couldn’t do anything about it, and feeling powerless made Wanda angsty. Mama Fairywinkle had the power to make her sister regress and lose everything she had been through. The terror and fear of her mother would never be forgotten.

I truly hope you don’t take the constructive criticism as me putting you down. I’m just trying to help you with your potential and gain more readers. Anyways, happy writing!

An amazing chapter and another amazing story by you.
I can't wait for the next chapter where we will hopefully bring one of my favorite character Big daddy (my two favorites in the entire show are Timmy and Wanda but I love every single Fairywinkle family member from the Grandma that appeared in one short that I didn't see for the main family members of the show)
I love your new take on Wanda and Blonda's mom, I don't think I ever read a FOP fanfic where she was a criminal and I have read all the T-K rating stories from page 89 to page 67 and most of the stories that came out since I created this account and couple of other stories that came out and I decided to read before I get there on my challenge and I never saw something like it...
And I love it! It seems to fit what she would have been, It's kinda weird for me the fact she doesn't like Blonda because in canon Wanda said that their mother always loved Blonda more, but I don't mind ignoring this fact especially because I enjoyed your story and interpretation of the mom.
I also enjoyed the fact Wanda called Mama Cozma to take both Timmy and Poof, I enjoy seeing Wanda acting like Timmy is her actual son and wanting to protect him even if he might not be in danger if her mom wouldn't discover his connection to her, but better be safe than sorry am I right?
I also enjoyed the version of Mama Cozma here, I loved the call back to the episode where Timmy was sick and Wanda called her to babysit Poof, and I also liked the fact this version of her was nicer than her show counterpart (But that to be expected because as it seems Wanda's mom is a dangerous Fairy that all of the Fairy world including Mama Cozma is afraid of) it's the first time I don't hate her and actually think some good things about her...
I can't wait for the next chapter (I won't review it but still )