| Reviews for Twenty-One |
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Funbunnypotter26 chapter 1 . 7/22 Aw this was so beautiful - i love the missing moments - JKR really needs to fill us in on what they got up to lol |
nomek1012 chapter 1 . 7/14 This is the sweetest one shot! Thank you! |
Bliksemstraal20 chapter 1 . 7/8 If FF had a star rating system, I would give this 6 out of 5 stars. Please write more fics like this! |
Jane Davidson chapter 1 . 7/4 I LOVE THIS! |
Celine Griffyndor chapter 1 . 7/2 how beautiful, thanks for sharing this, I loved it. congratulations |
hufflepuffiesten chapter 1 . 7/2 This is a beautiful story about Harry and Ginny, their relationship and their love. Twenty one *sighs*. |
santoskamilla.14 chapter 1 . 7/1 Tão lindo, tão bem escrito! Perfeito. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30 This was amazing. Probably the best fanfic I've ever read, period. I hope to keep seeing more! |
hermioneslibrary chapter 1 . 6/28 This is just perfect |
Mrs Pumpkins chapter 1 . 6/28 OMG! I know I keep saying that but I think it's my favourite one-shot so far ! I wanted to highlight all the sentences I loved but there are too many and the end made me emotional. First, thanks for writing about the missing moments from book 6! I remember there was only one sentence summarising all Harry and Ginny moments by saying they had a great time by the lake. I couldn't figure out why there were hundreds of pages of unhappy moments and just one line of real happiness. You made my day! Also I loved all the little details, the flying potion book, Ron and Hermione bickering, Luna and Neville dating, the Fat Lady's comment, and many more. The story-building around the number 21 was very well done as well. When I read the summary, I thought the story would end with Dumbledore's death. It was a good surprise that it didn't. Even though the end is actually happy, I couldn't help feeling sad for Ginny who would wake up the day after. But that's part of life, I would also have felt sad if Ginny had been the one to die first. Wow, it must be the my longest review yet ;-) What else to add? Just keep on writing please! |
Angel the Wizard chapter 1 . 6/28 Wow, that ending was sweet and sad :( I would hate to know what Ginny would do if she woke up that next morning... |
Gryffinclaw 31 chapter 1 . 6/27 You're on fire! I ditched my chemistry for this and I do not regret it! Merlin help me, how am I ever going to compete for the "I love you" challenge when I have people like you writing for it too! But, misery aside, I absolutely loved this, the writing was brilliant, the short moments were amazing, the characters might have gone just a liiiittle bit out of canon but I liked what you did with them, wow, I wonder how you keep tabs with so many stories, amazing stuff, keep it up ) |
Breanie chapter 1 . 6/27 First off, the simplicity of having the Potions book floating is amazing! I already love it! That’s what I love about Hinny, the simplicity of being together makes them happy! Slughorn would totally approve! He would not only ship them but do his best to work on getting Ginny to bring Harry out lol I still love that line despite not needing to know what a cluster is. Totally hc Ginny as a social butterfly — buck up, Harry, it’s good for you! I love Luna, so willing to help her friends try to make other girls jealous — so selfless and so typically Luna! She’s just so great! What a great line “Luna rose like a flower sprouting from a pot” — can literally picture this in my head and it’s perfect. I also love them walking like that, her hand in the back pocket of his trousers so perfect! Definitely not bad at this boyfriend thing — well done! Love the little info on who created the charms! That’s such an awesome detail to add! Did you make that up yourself or is that some unknown Potter wiki knowledge that I haven’t come across? Haha Hermione just takes the cheering charm off, maybe Harry actually did find Ron’s reaction funny LOL Love the Harry adjusting himself moment before they kiss near the Fat Lady. She would yell out, imagine how many students she’s had to watch snog over the years LOL? And maybe even more depending on the student! Wonder if anyone ever offended a portrait bad enough with PDA that they left… hmm… possibilities… Haha, going out with Cormac was the way girls tried to make Ron jealous — amazing! lmao! Bahaha, Potter wanted to keep me for the Quidditch team — did he though? LOL Haha, oh Ginny, Cor-Cor LOL I love that! Jones having zero interest in Harry! Amazing! Ginny deserves that attention and earned it! I can totally imagine this happening! Oooh naughty, just what they were doing in that broom cupboard? Wink, Wink! McGonagall would shoo him off but inside she’s totally cheering for him LOL Oh Ron, haha, you’ll never win! Don’t worry you won’t even notice once you snog Hermione. Ugh knowing it all fell on him just hurts me! He was scared he was never even going to get one day more — my heart! Only you would apologize for killing the foulest wizard to ever have lived — this is breaking my heart, I want to hug Harry! Aww first twenty-one minutes after the war in each other’s arms Oh god, Ginny crying for Remus and Tonks and for Teddy growing up without them — its allergies honest Ugh, Harry reflecting on how he didn’t even know his parents names until he was eleven — how could you! Man of few words, but make up for it tenfold with your actions — that’s just the sweetest, ugh. So love that Harry takes Teddy every weekend. That is 1000% my hc, no way he didn’t spend as much time as possible with that little boy! He is a big sop! My heart! I knew it! I just had a feeling… that was so beautiful and so perfect… too bad about these damn allergies though or I mean, cutting onions.. |
efilokefli chapter 1 . 6/27 that was perfect! |
Lady Lithe chapter 1 . 6/27 Ahh, so cute. My favorite scenes were the original 21 days they dated. I loved all those missed moments, especially the cheering charm on Harry. |