Honestly amazing! I felt like crying most of the way through it but that’s how you know it’s written well. I am completely in love with this!

Real review.

Im going to be honest, with the first 9 to 10 chapters I wanted to hate this story. It just struck me as one of those out of place stories. The characters felt out of place, I didn't really like the new character Shauna, although I don't like the whole punk/ rebellious thing, Idk just not for me. I think I caught the twist halfway through. I can't put my finger on exactly when I realised it, maybe the halloween party, but once I had my suspicions, I have to say I... hated it. Just certain things didn't make sense to me, because if Shauna was really *Spoiler* then how does the rape story come in, why would she try to kill Harry with that spell, etc. I was like this story is interesting and dumb at the same time. It was good and bad.

So my final verdict after completing it... well... it was incredible. 10/10. You answered every question you introduced. The plot was really captivating, especially the end and the diary entries were awesome, my favorite part. I still stand by with some characters out of place, but it's fanfiction and their your characters to flesh out the way you want. Anyways it was an awesome read, great job. Hope to read more from you.

Ok i can't stand it, how the hell did Harry figure out it was Ginny who came back the second time? I demand an answer lol.

Initial review..

It was sooo good!

d-scribe had a point when he criticised your variety and logic and general language skills, however, I totally disagree on his way of delivering them. Anyway, you could definitely work a little on your logic and insight in relationships (it seems unlikely to jump that much between love and hate so easily), and it was btw kinda obvious kinda early that she was Ginny. I suspected it basically directly from the start. Teen girl suddenly gets magical powers right after Ginny dies.. yeah... You simply can't end the Hinny ship, it simply is unsinkable. Thanks for your time, it was a really epic story, although I haven't gotten the impression that any of these people were christians, so expressions should have been something like 'Merlin' or 'Merlin's pants!', instead of 'God!', so yeah... I realise since God actually interacts with the world in, to the people, obvious ways, they would be converted, but before that? atheist wizards, the lot of them. Great work!

cheers

I'm confuse..!

I was crying a lot during reading story telling is it.

I feel like this is canon now why oh why did you make it? It feels out of character yet gripping and amazing. You killed me inside. You killed my love for ginny/Harry fanfics

WHATTTTT THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ! AMAZING!

LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I wasn't surprised cause you put Ginny as a main character so it was sorta obvious... I almost didn't read this fic cause the description was pretty meh but I'm so glad I did now!

Oh. My. God.
That was the most amazingly written story every!
Amazing plot! And huge plot twists as well.
Good work!

I just...I literally can't express my love for this story in words!
At the end I was a little disappointed when Harry married ' Shauna Swirl'
And then when we found out she was Ginny, I almost died of happiness!
I loved that story so much! You're an amazing writer!

You could have made it happier because this is to sad! Be happy don't worry!

Why the heck werent there more reviews for this story?! I love the details, because I actually read this one a while back. And the whole time I went looking through archives of old HP fanfics, this story was the one I nearly remember most! I apologize that I maybe did not review this story before. But i am certainly looking forward to re-reading it again!(:

One of my favs in HPfics.. I'm reading it for the 4th time.. :) Thanks so much for such an amazing book

Hey mate awesome story and it is a really great idea but would suggest one thing that next time you play with such a twist please don't list the character you know like if anyone sees your story they may be able to guess the twist...!anyway i loved the last twist of the story! Great job and hope you write more