Great chap! The first scene I feel is setting up for a reveal of some sort. Either that or just a setting for Jaken to be asking Raven to kick his butt! Lol!
Oh Raven you got yourself into that! Zero actually made her blush! Hmmm... I wonder if he will either mention that or think on that later.

The training between Harpuia and Foxfire was great! She’s getting better, but much like Phantom gets distracted when her opponent teases her about her feelings!
Harpuia getting in on the teasing is gold! And I love her reaction to his threat to tell Phantom. It should she can move fast... with the right incentive! Lol!
Though I did notice that he “conveniently” left out that he slipped on the ice too!
Oh Lumine is soo looking for a butt kicking and Harpuia seems to be more than willing to be the one to administer it!
HAHAHAHA! Fefnir and Sobek ran Lumine over I LOVE IT! Then he got pinned underneath the big blue derp! So funny!
Well Lumine it looks like you are going to have to find another person to creep out! Foxfire is busy! Lol!

Uh oh Raven’s got a fan boy! And would you look at that Zero and Raven are getting along... sort of. Well at least their working together again!

Sobek and Fefnir picking on Lumine and Foxfire all in one scene, talk about troll masters! And Foxfire found someone she can beat in a fight! Though she may need more training on watching her back.

Fefnir, Sobek and Raven trading insults, Foxfire would really want to hide if all three of them ever became friends! Lol!

Aaaaaakkkk Zero kidnapped Foxfire! And Raven does not seem happy about it! Oh dear, I see a fight in the future!

And oh boy is Phantom pissed! Fefnir and Sobek better hide! Awesome chap can’t wait for more!

"And your BUTT!"

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-

Alright, this was a great chapter. The banter here is great, and we're starting to get a glimmer of a backstory for Raven and Foxfire. This is exciting. :3

RAVEN IS FREAKING WILD! SURE, LET'S BLOW UP THE WHOLE BUILDING! That was awesome! The whole battle scene was so epic and cool!

That ending though! 0.0 Are they sworn enemies? Cousins? Sisters!? I gotta find out. :)

Great chap.. per usual.
The first scene was so funny. Look out Foxfire! Now Harpuia is getting in on the teasing!
Hmmm... seems like Foxfire is starting to have some reservations about Master X. Well I wonder where this will go? Also Foxfire is protecting Raven by not spilling her secret to Harpuia. Very interesting!

Go figure, Raven being stubborn. Hmmm... Foxfire totally called that one. Refusing to stay in the med ward, going on missions, ... avoiding Zero. Sounds accurate.
I love the conversation between Ciel and Raven. Their dynamic is great. It makes sense that they have known each other for years since Ciel seems to be the only person that Raven listens to. I can’t wait to see their past fleshed out.
Oh Raven’s reaction to finding out that Zero had been the one to find her. To perfect!

Oh Sobek you better run! That prank was AWESOME! But there is gonna be some sweet retribution coming from Phantom! I can’t wait for that! And Harpuia slipping at the end! OMG I LOVED IT!
Oh I love Zero tracking Raven down. The conversation was great and smart! He really pissed her off by not fighting and just defending. Oh she is itching for a fight with this guy. Though I think that is just part of her defense. Someone who is prickly and always stirring for a fight is not someone that people try’s to get close to.
Can’t wait for the next chap!

Oh I love this chap!
The beginning was so emotional. Raven is definitely uncomfortable without her armor. What else is she hiding and where did she get that scar. More mysteries, you are building a great story here!
Zero is seriously confused isn’t he? The scene with Ciel was perfect. Now both her and Raven has some explaining to do.
That Lumine guy is creeeeeepy! None of the guardians like him obviously. Espically Harpuia and Phantom! That guy better watch it. Only some one reeeeeeealy sim would make a move on a ninja’s girl!

Awesome, emotional chap! I loved it!
Wow, Sandstorm actually has a PLAN... for something. And Sobek really wasn’t thinking when he tried to insult him was he? Lol!

Uh oh Fefnir is in trouble. None of his siblings are happy with him! I love the sarcasm from Phantom. It really fits his character.

So Raven has “done this before” hmmmm.. that makes one wonder more about her and Foxfire’s past.
I love how Foxfire is able to talk circles around the troops and eventually get her way. Though she not that much of a smooth talker around Phantom is she?

Oh boy, Zero is ready to run off after Raven. Even Ciel barely stops him for even a few moments. Great look into part of his character. Though he is starting to get curios about this “ability” that Ciel keeps referring too, but he doesn’t stop long enough to actually listen to her.

Oh boy Raven is definitely hurt bad! You can hear the plea in her voice when she realizes she is out of contact with the others.

Ah Foxfire is afraid of flying, I wonder why that would be. Just another mystery yet to be solved in a great story! I love her reaction when she falls but stops before hitting the water! So funny!
Someone can’t do two things at once I see. She ended up taking a small swim! Lol! Shootings herself with Ravens blaster and taking out her own radio in one go... Good job! Haha!

Oh I love the “argument between the two soldiers as to who would be calling Phantom about Foxfire! That had me rolling! So funny! And Phantom was not happy about Foxfire going off by herself... again.

I love the meet up between Foxfire and Raven. There is obviously a long history between these two and I can’t wait to find out about it!
The confrontation between Foxfire and Zero was perfect! Well played!
RAVEN IS A FREAKING HUMAN! Or Cyborg whatever you want to call her. I did not see that coming! I want to know more!

Whoa, I love the way Raven fights in this one, but the Mavericks are ruthless! Maybe Raven and her team will have better luck planting that virus next time. :3

Ooooooooh, this is starting NICELY. :3

I already love Raven and Foxfire. Raven is so cool, and Foxfire is adorable! Phantom's picked out a good one, but don't tell HER that!

Awesome chap! I love the beginning. You really are starting to get a sense of copy x’s character. I am surprised that Sobek of all people came up with such a good plan. They almost had them. Nobody lets Foxfire speak do they. Either that or they just don’t listen on her. Hmmmm... sounds familiar.

Oh boy Ciel knows something and Raven doesn’t want her to talk about it. Hmmm... curiouser and curiouser. What are they hiding I wonder? I love the parallels with the sun and moon. A yin and yang situation.

Hahahahaha nerd bot! And Raven is not happy about their new partner. Raven and Zero still are not getting along I see. I think Zero is still mad about the bombs! Lol!

OMG! Zero has a fan boy! That’s great!
Come on Raven don’t be so mean! And yes Zero, Raven always does things her own way. She’s not much of a team player yet is she?

Hmmm... Raven sure seems bitter about someone. Though Foxfire seems just as bitter. I wonder when they will make up.

Oh dear ambushed again! And Raven has lost her advantage, Phantom can see through her cloak. Not good! Raven really hates clones. I guess that comes back to her experience with copy x.
Oh boy did she get under Phantom’s skin! I love the taunting! So much so that she was able to get the drop on him. Lol!

Wow! Sobek’s plan actually worked! They got away with Colbor’s data pad! Oh boy I wonder how bad that’s going to be!

Aaaaannd of course! The whole gang has to show up! Though Raven got a good shot in on Leviathan! Though Zero almost got his bell rang by Fefnir!

Noooooo! Raven sacrificed herself for Zero and Colbor! Fefnir you are in deeeeeeep doo doo! Great chap!

Oh boy where to start! This chap was AWESOME! You conveyed just how much Foxfire did not want to talk about Raven right in the first scene. Something big must have happened between the two!
I laughed so hard at Leviathan’s “ninja boy” jab at Phantom. Loved it! Though this scene also shows that the rebels have been getting inside information. But from who I wonder?
Oh boy Zero was not happy about Ravens bomb surprise! Caught him a little off guard, didn’t it?
Though Zero caught her off guard with that trust comment. Made her reveal a little about her past. You can really hear the bitterness in her tone when she tells him about Foxfire.
All the sibling teasing was great! Perfectly placed too. It helps to alleviate the angst of the first part of this chap before diving into the second part.
I love the training sequence. First Raven trying to change the subject by ranting about not wanting Zero as her only back up. Sure we believe she was going to say nose, don’t we? Lol! The best part of this scene is when Zero is watch her. You can feel franticness of her training, as you have shown her to be a well trained fighter yet here she is making rookie mistakes. Then her just falling to her knees. Perfect! What oh what could have her so blindly upset? Though I see trouble on the horizon as Zero seems to be determined to uncover what she is determined to hide. That flashback was a great peek into Raven past. The reveal that she use to be a Neo Arcadian soldier is something you can really build on. And the HORROR! Ciel’s parents use to make her eat her BROCCOLI! THE HORROR I SAY!
The was Foxfire’s scene at the end mirrors Ravens was, again, perfect! Now the question becomes... who betrayed who?
Darn you X! Phantom finally try’s to talk to Foxfire and you have to go an interrupt! Darn you!
As I said AWESOME chap! Can’t wait for the next!

Great chap! The almost kiss at the beginning was awesome! Naw... Phantom is feeling awkward and I think Sobek has a death wish.
What does FF know about the sky fire and why is she so scared? Hmmmm... also the teasing of the other lieutenants is great!
What does Raven know about the sky fire for that matter? Whatever she knows, it sure spooked Jaken.
Fire truck butt! Ha I love it! Raven and Zero still are not getting along I see. This makes for some funny insults! I love how you were able to get some of Zero’s past explained here.
Love the fight scene! Zero almost got his butt kicked by Phantom for pointing his blaster at FF. I would love to see that scene from Phantom’s POV.
Uh oh... FF and Raven know each other! Can’t wait to see how that plays out. Again great great chap!

Oh! Great chap! I love it! Zero and Raven are still butting heads I see. I love Ravens fight with Shadow and her reaction to seeing Phantom. I don’t think she was happy. That ability of hers... nice!
That interview was gruesome! Very accurate as to how the “bad” guys would interrogate an enemy combatant.
I love the fact that even Commander Harpuia is getting in on the teasing. So cute!
Uh oh they think they have found the “sky fire.” Could Raven really be the one hiding it?

I am already in love with this story! The mysterious beginning was ominous. Raven is fiery and sassy, bit she and Zero don’t seem to be getting along. I wonder why? Foxfire is so you! It great! I love all the teasing from the boys. So cute!