Don’t use ‘Mrs.’ on an unmarried woman use ‘Ms.’ instead.

Jaune's strength, stamina, and endurance is actually all he's got going for him in the beginning. He was never physically weak, even before Pyrrha's training. He was flung by the death-stalker full force in the show and not only walked it off but jumped how many feet in the air to catch Weiss. Still, this is a very intriguing read and I look forward to it.

Although, I do hope Jaune manages to avoid the complete merging so that there will always be the two souls rather than one.
The way I can theorize it, is that if Jaune unlocked his canon semblance early he may boost his own soul to the degree it's too much to merge, or at least pushes the process back; sort of like a tsunami fighting a bucket of food coloring.

I love it how Jaune can so easily get the rise on Ozpin, the Mister casual at all times losing his cool like that is amusing. Honestly I think Jaune influences him just as much as Ozpin influences Jaune.

Noticed that both Pyr and Ruby said something along the lines that “They must do etc”

Ruby doesn’t seem the sort of character to talk that way, maybe with “we have to do this”

Pyr too, if only because seeing must in that context just feels off.

It funny that Ruby be a character but maybe you can slow down n describeore in your story to really build a clear world and image of the character... The story moves too fast and too little character development and its causing the people to be quite paper thin in characters an dpersonality... Making them flat which is a shame cause u have a good story... Maybe the other te can have nora as team leader or it will be a team of 8with jaune as leader n nora as vice leader cause somehow glunda or ozpin think she is the most suitable n responsible one haha that will be a twist... Also hope ren, nora and pryhha will be develop well n utilise a lot cause they can contribute. A lot to the story especially in making the story move differently and with original character arcs

poor pyrrha

At this rate by the time we meet salem we'll probably sass her to death

I like this quite a bit more then most of Coeur Al'Aran's on going works. The mixed up teams are good, the dynamic between Jaune and Oz is solid. I like how Jaune isn't going "woe is me, I'm being killed by a magical parasite". I'm wondering if Jaune is gonna try and get Oz to teach him magic or proper sword form.

How ironic, Pyrrha complaining about being recognized—when no one recognized her partner, the daughter of the leaders of the faunus nation, and partner of a well known terrorist!

This is awesome! I've seen the idea of Jaune becoming the next Ozpin (before the whole Oscar thing happened), but this is only the second fic I've seen with the premise. Glad to see it's a good quality one.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

The level of sass thay will come from a combined Ozpin and Jaune will be glorious. Also Qrow will love it considering his own Ice Queen.

Oz is gonna get Jaune in all kinds of trouble with his sass. I look forward to it.

Well.

Fuck.

This is some good shit.

Nice.

i once made a request for couer to write a jaune hosting ozma story glad to see someone took it up

An interesting start of a story. I look forward to what you make of it.