Bro. This is almost exactly the same as the original. But kudos to you for the idea.

This needs some work.

i feel a little bit off about this story like doesn't jaune have his semblance or ruby doesn't know he has his semblance
or ruby should have feel tougher than that

but i did like how ruby trying to figure out about jaune and being mindful what jaune being through

i like the mystery behind ozma and ozpan
make me wonder what happen the rest of the rwby gang and jaune former family and friend

interesting start and i look about Warble which was a good comic
which i thank you warble existence

the only thing i can complain about what happen jaune former friend and family
they started to forget about jaune and i though WTF are they going to live a happy life
will they not going to feel guilty or shame or bashing or karma (F*CK them, not you FunbariVoid i mean the character sitaution)
the wby or npr past cast or sin is like burn kitchen while jaune crime is like a spill milk but they treat it like a burn house

it also make me curios what happen to ruby, normal i would think she would be with her team being family and all so why she living alone

i just hope when you continue the story jaune and ruby will met them again
will they beg forgiveness what they did to jaune

also does jaune have a last name anymore because his parent (or is it all his family) disown him then he shouldn't have a last name