Reviews for if this is love (why does it hurt?)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
Omg poor Hina! when will be Naruto's POV turn? I want to read how he is suffering as well hehe
Punkgurl86 chapter 1 . 7/27
I love story with Drama this is awesome.
RenegadeSon chapter 5 . 7/25
I like this! Angsty, unrequited love is right up my alley lol. It’s so frustratingly satisfying. Watching these two clearly battle with miscommunication and misunderstandings if it’s that last sentence perfectly lol.
TAYYABALARAIB chapter 5 . 7/22
This was downright hilarious from the title to the last word.
Shu chapter 5 . 7/17
Really loved this story so far. Looking forward for more! Update soon! :)
Papaleta chapter 5 . 7/16
So Naruto share secrets when he is drunk? I think that could be really interesting in the future hahah
aviesee chapter 5 . 7/16
Ah, I'm loving this story so much! You write their thoughts so well! So looking forward for the next chapter.
Lila08 chapter 5 . 7/16
I already love this fanfiction continues the good work.
Rosedove chapter 5 . 7/16
OMG that’s the best chapter so far! Ugh! I really really like the way you used flashbacks, it is becoming very clear and detailed and i cant wait to read about Naruto’s chapter in the future. Kudos for writing effective dramatic scenes and comedic ones. Is there a posibility for full lemon at all? Or how this entire “transaction” has even started? So many things that i like and want to ask, i just like this story so much. Thanks for the update!
NoJusticeNoPeace chapter 5 . 7/16
I loved the latest chapter. It captured Sai’s personality perfectly and not many people can write Sai so perfectly with humor laced with his blunt ignorance. Can’t wait for another chapter
wind-0-chaser chapter 5 . 7/16
HAHA this is my fav chap yet. the flashback was wonderfully fluffy and using Sai and his pov for this chap was brilliant! Sai so confused because Naruto and Hinata's actions were at odds with how they saw their relationship and each other. love it. his observations were hilarious.
Sara Romero chapter 5 . 7/16
Omg! I love how you write Sai, it was so real, you captured his essences. Naruto and Hinata are so obvious and oblivious that hurt...but I love it
Can't wait for more
Yamajiji chapter 5 . 7/16
I’m happy they made up and its obvious that they both want each other. Just hope they can work that out.
Sara Romero chapter 4 . 7/16
I love it!
You become in one of my favorite author!
Hope you continue soon
aviesee chapter 3 . 7/13
Hi! I'm really enjoying your story. And showing different character's perspective is a good way to tell the story. Hope you continue! Stay safe!
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