I have no idea what to say. Was funny though, don't know if it was intentional or unintentional

Okay wow, first off, i don't mean to be blunt, but this was extremely funny. I don't know if it was supposed to be funny with the grammatical errors and sexual overtones, but i had quite a laugh. Other than that, the idea of a rage gun and people thinking that Peter Parker is a schizophrenic is quite hilarious, and interesting.

If you do write a second chapter, i hope it is as funny as this, or if it's not meant to be a comedy, then hopefully it becomes what you hoped to achieve with this chapter.