that was cute!

you're writing flows very well and you've done a fantastic job of capturing the character of spike-bravo

That's good stuff! Very true to their voices; what I imagine their inner monologues to be.

A nice smooth story, as usual from you. I liked the interaction. the feeling(I got) that Spike loves her so much that he kinda wants to live in denial(his jealosy of Angel and Buffy). He believes that her true love is to angel but that he is content to axcept what she gives him as long as he can ignore/forget about Angel. I can't wait for more.

Wonderful. Perfect tone. Keep going!

Nice story. I imagined the missing scenes were like this. Please continue! I want to see the second basement scene *wink wink*