Reviews for Demon Steel
Chainharte chapter 1 . 7/18
I love the basic premise of this fic. I only have one complaint: When will we see more? And also, I have a few ideas on how to make it work, if you'll pm me, we can talk about them.
HAIL KING DELIRIOUS chapter 1 . 7/15
Update soon
Crown of Reaper chapter 1 . 7/11
Not a bad start, it could have been a bit longer. Just be careful, fusing two franchises and not using the transportation method in crossover fanfic is hard to be done right. I'd suggest taking HSDXD's ruleset and adding enough of the Nanuverse one to make it represent both universes, but if you already know how to do it then ignore what I suggested.
Sgt117 chapter 1 . 7/4
Not a bad start.
DaDragon562 chapter 1 . 7/3
Interesting start, but seriously 6 year olds first kiss being with their tongue shoved down each other's throat? What sort of perverted 6 year olds do you know? They're not horny teenagers...
Shashenka chapter 1 . 7/2
Thanks for putting in the time and effort to write this thus far! I really enjoyed the first chapter and would love to see more!
Zashhu chapter 1 . 7/2
If Shirou who is younger than Akeno is going to university wouldn’t you have skipped the entire plot of dxd.
nemo9000 chapter 1 . 7/1
this is good man I can't wait to see how this progresses keep it up
Sultan Asil Arslan chapter 1 . 6/28
An interesting concept but we all saw Shiro being the descendant of Muramasa.
Captainrex22345 chapter 1 . 6/28
Interesting set up and im excited to see how this goes. As mentioned by another reviewer the only thing I can recommend is to remove your authors note in the summary.

I almost overlooked this because of it personally and Im glad I didnt. I look forward to the direction you'll take the story in. My only question is if this is a multi or single paring I am definitely behind shirou and Akeno.
Dakumun chapter 1 . 6/27
I see a lot of potential here, the only thing I hope will happen is Shirou obtaining Tsumugari Muramasa. How you do itif you actually have Shirou getting the bladeMay have me on the edge of my seat. I await your next update.
superdopeguy98 chapter 1 . 6/27
Ngl, there's something disturbing about a six and seven year old tongue kissing.
gasacan90 chapter 1 . 6/26
I like this and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Ghostly chapter 1 . 6/26
I must agree with some of the other reviewers, while I do understand the title, I prefer Shirou to be neither of the factions. Turning him into a devil may or may not take away his ability to utilize holy blades from his reality marble. I would like him to be the middle man of these conflicts as he always has been in my eyes.
Anon chapter 1 . 6/26
Please continue.
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