Sorry to keep asking this, but do you have a plan to balance "cheap removal spells like 'Path to Exile'?" It is a one mana white that would be able to like onshot sirzechs...which seems a little OP. The way MTG balances it is that one can only have 4 in the deck, so a player cannot just keep casting it on everything.

Great Work

nice chapter thx for writing it
hmm am guesing the strong person issei felt is the one asia and mittelt felt :D

I like this Fic, MTG was my childhood. I am curious as to how the "powerscaling" will go in this fic. As in, are spells more effective based on the strength of the caster and weaker based on the strength of the recipient?

So irina would enter like the pawn of rias?. Miltet would be saved for issei or the other fallen and run out?

Issei and is luck for found little girls , first kunouh who becomes in strage stalker and next miltet who use him for speak of her problems .With luck this not send message following is smell jajaj.

If he not enters to kokabiel arc what he does in riser arc travel? Imagine the revelation in the battle of kokabiel he and vali arrive at same time knocks kokabiel and next fight or something at time the others are in wtf moment

I again find Issei's behavior odd here. I get in the moment he was knocked off balance by his emotions but he never really recovers. By Ddraig's own words: he knows what Rias is and should have some inkling about Irina given his ability to sense power, yet he neither intervenes over what should've been an obvious attempt at a shakedown by Rias nor tries to introduce himself since his stated goal for being on this Plane is to recruit allies. Sirzechs Lucifer would be at the top of that list.
Basically, I feel that Issei, at times, doesn't fit the character we were introduced to in the beginning: a very powerful, experienced Planeswalker looking to rebuild his army/assault squad, and instead get this angsty protagonist that is purely reactive.

Great job on the chapter. Lets see Issei do what he does best here next time...

Good fic, keep it isseirina as anything else just complicates a whole lot of shit and would also just make the fix unbearable as literally the only thing rias has going for anyone not in her peerage is her looks. So please don't write a shitty romance like that

If I'm being honest I don't care if Raynare lives or dies, I would like to see Dohnaseek or Miltelt survive and become decent and possibly strong characters.

Both of them generally get the shaft, Dohnaseek because he is the evil battle hungry character introduce and ppl don't bother to try and flesh him out, and Miltelt cause she is generally seen as the least attractive of the 3 Fallen women, unless she hits your type, so ppl just forget about her all together, I however think all 4 of the first Fallen that are seen could be fleshed out and turned into decent characters.

Frankly I think that is a major problem with DXD altogether most characters have potential to be great but aren't around or seen enough for it to happen, that is why I think the DXD world is a great open world for fanfiction.

Ah.

I am absolutely on board with this story and I can't wait for more.

The Issei and Irina scenes were interesting.

You can also make Issei make a joke about the acronym of the club that Rias has, after all the acronym is ORC and honestly it is not a good acronym since it can be confused with orc and everyone knows what reputation these creatures have(eroge games) ... XD

Kill Raynare, she is and will always be just a psychopathic bitch who wants to take off Azazel's pants or send her to prison. And may the other three fallen angels be saved (especially Mittelt).

Of course you are at least showing that she is a bit more intelligent and competent than her canon counterpart.

I also think that Raynare is pathetic as an antagonist and personally I prefer her to die as I don't like it when she receives mercy and redemption, she just doesn't deserve that option

Please don't exaggerate Riser, he is not a sociopathic killer rapist (that's Diodora's work).He performs best in light novel and Manga, anime exaggerates his personality.

Don't overdo the comparison between Gisela and Rias either.

Don't make Rias act like she is the victim in her political marriage because she is not.

the way Asia meets the fallen angels was interesting and much more believable than how it happened in canon

You just had to use the Rias reminded option that so overdone in my opinion. Just once, I hope he's not interested in Rias. But that probably won't happen.

I not see enough from raynare to decide , in this moment my balance is to save miltet for advert asia.
When they go to issei house they would have a surprise , this crusade would finish in one day.

Wait for see the dinner i dont imagine issei stay to finish all or only for dinner with rias in same room . If they see gisela on rias and the exorcist and monk in the same room it would be interesting and a disaster for kiseki .

How issei plans to travel arround world if they can not fly , if yasaka not gives im money he cant go out of japan.