Knocking it out of the park with that title. I spent a long time re-titling my story the first time and it's still not as good or fitting for my story as yours is.

The story was a really interesting read. the way things are described, all eloquent and absolutist, made me think Double was narrating at first, but as it went on it became clear that the narrator was closer to Marie. As composed as Marie is in-game, I wouldn't picture her talking like this, though it was a very interesting style and i suppose it doesn't matter anyways since it's a third person narrator. Good job overall.