Awesome

That was an absolutely lovely story.

Nnngh! I love this sooo much! Mordecai’s revelation to Cedric about who was in control at the end was just perfect; and I loved the way Zinnia asked them point blank, as a child would, if they were in love :D. Cedfia’s conversation as she drifted off to sleep was so precious, love how he called her his Mermaid ;). And of course those “this-is-pretty-much-a-confession-But-we’re-still-waiting-on-making-it-official”, and kisses were wonderful!

Pffft! Omg! Greylock flirting with Ivy, XD. Also I’m glad about her pardon and freedom, even if she’s elected to stay on the island.

I had to laugh out loud at the clever doings of the First Story Keeper. Sofia got just a tad annoying when she described Ariel and Eric as "caring about each other". That's an understatement. Just say it, girl. They fell in love. And you don't "care" about Cedric. You love him. I'm looking forward to your next piece. Farewell for now.

Fun start w/Mordecai and Cedric's chat. I liked the scene of putting the girls to bed, then Zinnia's dialogue. Also, Sofia's tired comments to Cedric. Good comparison between them and Ariel and Eric.

The parents' return w/news of Ivy no longer officially banished was nice. Interesting theory on her hair, and Greylock's thoughts. Solid ending part, with use of the weather. Great story.

Mordecai tricked them, lol! Awww, the fluff and sweetness is too much for my heart to handle! :D This story was sweet, a lot of fun, and definitely a memorable one. Great job and thank you for creating another fantastic story!

So Mordecai let them loose at the end. That sly old man. And now Cedric is aware of it. Squee! A new door has opened. Cedric is not going to forget that almost kiss any time soon. LOL! I loved all the Cedfia. Ooh. Zinnia even asked if they were in love. Cute! I'm glad everything worked out for Ivy. Yes, Cedric and Sofia belong together. They always have.

SO FLUFFY! i LOVE IT! I'm glad Mordecai set them up even though those two had complete control! Good job,Aqua!

I loved it! I knew the kiss wasn’t going to happen from the previous chapter, but this was even better! They weren’t acting! And Cedric is now aware of that fact! This opens up a 'whole new worldheh, wrong movie) of possibilities. At least until the confession. I loved all the Cedfia moments in this chapter. The teasing from Ivy and Greylock. The kids! Tanya’s sarcasm. Zinnia was adorable, especially when she told her version of the story. She even asked if they were in love. I like that Ivy declined her sister’s offer. She likes where she’s at, she’s found her place. Good for her! I feel like things are going to be really interesting between Cedfia now. I'm so psyched!

Ooh! What a twist with Grimtrix turning on Morgana. He truly is a vile villain.

Cedfia’s moments together and confessions of love were so sweet. Especially the way he protected her, and that proposal. Squee! So precious!

Gah! You tease! How dare! And let me guess, next chapter they’ll immediately be flung out of the story and back into the real world before they can finish. Smh. Tsk tsk tsk. ;)

OHH! A cliffhanger! I loved that deep conversation between Cedric and Wormwood, especially when Wormwood started talking about it being fate. I also really liked Grimtrix in here. He was, for the first time, a real villain. This is the Grimtrix I want to see if you use him as a villain again. And, ooh, plot twist! Roland had magic too! Did not see that coming. I think it's funny how the guards are still useless under the sea. Haha. We got a proposal! Yay! Now Cedric and Sofia just have to do it for real. Oh, and Violet was good in here too! I think I covered everything.

I must admit that I liked the outcome. I totally ship Grimtrix and Morgana. But just one thing. Why was the amulet able to grant Sofia's wish to be a frog when there were literally no frogs present? And how would she knew what a frog is? Other than that, I did enjoy this, and I am looking forward to getting back to the real story.

I loved it! Wormwood really pushed Cedric in the right direction. And, WOW! That twist with Grimtrix turning on Morgana was unexpected, though not entirely unsurprising. And Roland having magic... Who would have guessed? I loved the part when Cedfia revealed their love for each other. And the almost kiss... Well, I have to admit that I was expecting the story to end like that. Still, you just HAD to tease... LOL! Great job!

Nice opening, then an intense scene w/Roland angry, an Morgana showing up. Good menace in Grimtrix w/his crew member. I liked Wormwood once again. Solid writing of Sofia's time running out, then the climax. Great twist w/Roland having magic. And that end.

Okay, all I can sau it was fun. I loved it! I'm glad Wormwood told Cedric he needed to be with Sofia. Not bluntly or straight forward but he helped none the less!