what a fucking cool story. i like it. well i like all your story actually. you have a great skill you know

Hm.

This. Was. AWESOME!

The confrontation between Shirou and Archer is always a treat when handled correctly and this was so much more than just 'correct'. The angle where it's Archer's conviction breaking that decides the fight feels right, the servant SHOULD be more than able to win, however everything he actually wished for at the moment made his resistance pointless, especially deadly in the middle of using the manifestation of your conviction and worldview. I do feel like it's a bit strange that Shirou didn't finish him off but that's the only nitpick I can think of.

The part with Olga trying desperately to get a grasp of what was happening before her was interesting, showing a magus coming to a conclusion to put her faith in someone makes it all the better.

And last but not least, really enjoying Cu's perspective. He shows that he is very much selfaware of his faults and regonizes that this is the moment to use every dirty trick in the book. Victory at all costs!

Oh man...! That scene at the end with EMIYA picking himself up skewered after(letting)Shirou win is incredible.

The scene itself brings about an image I can easily picture. Well done on that.

Joder esta muy bueno espero el siguiente con ancias

Ok. Allow me to join the group in congratulating you on another spectacle of a chapter.

Great action scenes along with a beautifully written cliffhanger that leaves people, including me, wanting more. Its great.

Now, pleasantries aside, I do have some... questions about things lore-wise.

I understand this is fanfiction, so lore continuity between canon and this isn't to be perfectly expected. But I was hoping to get some answers about things that have been bugging me, as well as raise them to your attention.

Most of my questions are about Archer.

How does Archer use his UBW? It is to my understanding that shadow servants have their Noble Phantasms sealed away, as a result of the mental corruption the blackened Grail gives them. There is the argument that it's part of his magecraft rather than a stand alone Noble Phantasm, but you clearly state that: "-The one Noble Phantasm that could ever be possessed by Heroic Spirit Emiya..." I'm rather confused on this. Maybe through sheer willpower because of the promise to Rin? I don't know.

Could Archer really match Shirou as a corrupted servant? That scene was amazingly well done. Period. However, and this brings me back to my previous point, wouldn't the mental corruption inflicted on Archer cause him to fight at a degraded level? In this weakened state, Archer, in canon, couldn't defeat Caster Cu. Im unclear about the strength of Caster Cu and what level Shirou is currently at, but I do think that mental interference on Archer would have an undeniable effect on his fighting style. Would he match Shirou? Maybe, but I do think it could go either way. It could just be another clash of ideals rather than strength. My main issue is that its not too clearly written nor implied in the fight scene about Archer's weaknesses.

Could Rule Breaker sever the blackened Grails connection with him? Now this is a point of contention. I have heard many arguments for either side of this, and I'm not too clear myself. So, because of my expansive uncertainty with this matter, I won't fuss over this very much. Personally I think it might, but I can't think of a good reason for any of the two sides. I'll accept it 'just working', as it does make for an amazing cliffhanger.

That marks the end of my more urgent questions. I have a few others, but I do think they are supposed to be plot points and will be answered in future chapters.

So, overall great stuff, just have a few tiny tidbits of messy lore that need to be cleared up. I'm not the most familiar with F/GO, but I do think what Im saying is for the most part, correct.

Fingers crossed for the next update!

You proved my earlier review right author...This is truly a GLORIOUS chapter!

Badass Shirou and Archer tracing Noble Phantasm, setting them into a Broken Phantasm! All the while Olga is only just a battery for Shirou and a Tsukkomi character... Brilliant, this is trully part of my glorious collection, well it's already a part of my glorious collection, but still this chapter just truly emphasized it's gloriousness once again, and it ain't moving from it's spot!

Ritsuka, Mash, trust Cu, he is right, worrying for your friend is natural, but this is Shirou, and all Cu mentioning him is true, which I disagree with the "He's harder to kill than a cockroach" metaphor, I rather it will be like "He's tougher than steel" or something of the like, even if it's corny and cliche, however I shall begrudgingly concede to Cu's metaphor as it still makes sense.

Man looks the plan is to shout "Shirou is alive!", Cu, I wonder if you are digging your own grave, don't test your luck too much or once again as always Lancer Ga Shinda... Or was it Caster Ga Shinda? Hmm... Class change is confusing... I got it! Cancer(Cu got summon as Caster first in the Fuyuki F singularity timeline so it makes sense for the Caster's "Cas" part to go first and Lancer's "Cer" part to go last) it is then! Even if it sounds hilarious it makes sense to me-

Wait... Does his true class change might be... MOON CANCER!

Nah that might be a coincidence... Right author?

Anyway, moving on the important matter here...

As I said this chapter is Glorious... Which I am going to talk about the most glorious part of it... And that is the cherry on top... REALITY MARBLES, UNLIMITED BLADE WORKS BATTLE! And Olga's current reality turns into dust...

Man it was brilliant! The chant of UBW difference of Shirou and Emiya, the synchronization of unleashing their respective UBW. How the Fate Stay Night battles of the could've happened have been written gloriously in this story and fueled my imagination! Shirou UBW is beautiful while Archer's UBW is lonely and barren. Man how Shirou UBW slowly dominates Archer, when it grows patches of grass on his side was amazing and badass!

Truly you captured how the fight between the two go...

This is truly a glorious chapter! Thank you once again Author, Parcasious-sensei.

I hope you continue the great work in the future and have a nice day.

Hohoho! Cu Lancer is back! Olga can only incredulously at what she is seeing, a boy that just summon a Noble Phatasm and a Caster that class change. This is hilarious lol, and man the fight is badass.

Man it was sad when the feels came, Medusa failed... She failed to save Sakura and everyone, and is suffering from the tainted mud. Welp Rest in peace Medusa, your suffering is no more. Cu and Shirou will not fail.

Olga, you must accept this, don't use any of your current logic, or it will break you. Your current logic is too fragile afterall. Cu class change, end of the talk.

That was heartwarming for Cu to finally have his trusty partner Spear, Gae Bolg, back! Now he attains a portion of his power, but will it be enough to beat Saber? Hoho, speaking of Saber, I wonder how Shirou will react to her? And most importantly, this Fuyuki Singularity F timeline's Archer Emiya!

OH MY GOD! CUTE MYSTIC EYE WAIFU MASTER OPHELIA HAVE BEEN SAVED! IT IS ALL THANKS TO SHIROU HAVING NOTICED THE BOMB, SAVING OLGA WHICH IN TURN HAVE HER SAW THAT HAPPENING WITH HER MYSTIC EYES AND USE THE DELAT OF HER BOMB TO HER ADVANTAGE! Thank you Shirou for saving her! Wait second... IS SHE GONNA BE INCLUDED IN HIS EVER-GROWING-HAREM OR UNLIMITED HAREM ROUTES/WORKS?! Man I am excited for the RomComs!

Thank you author for saving and including Ophelia in the future story! Hopefully include Kadoc and Anastasia! Also want for sudden special event singularity and them reacting to it, while Ritsuka and Shirou got used to it, like a certain comic! I shall show you and give you the link on the PM if you like. Hope you answer my PM.

Man another feels arrived... Rin... *tears slowly falling* RIN! DAMN YOU LEV! YOU MUST SKEWERED AND BURN AND FEEL OUR RAGE AND SUFFER PAINFULLY!

A Tohsaka shall return their revenge tenfold, don't worry Rin, Shirou will keep his promise. Mark my words.

Preparations for epic battle, a confrontation of the past and the future or was it the present and the future?

Welp I can only know that... AN EPIC BATTLE OF TWO IDEALS AND BELIEFS WILL CLASH, THE POWER OF TRACING AND UNLEASHING OF REALITY MARBLES! TRULY IT WILL BE GLORIOUS!

And the cherry on top of the cake is... Olga... Be prepared Olga... Your current logic... Will be shattered-

BY AN EARTHQUAKE AND THERE IS NOTHING FOR YOU TO DO TO STOP IT, IT IS INEVITABLE AFTERALL!

Man, I shal view the latest the next chapter!

Freaking Epic. Good chp

Ominous

This is... AMAZING! Shirou badass as ever! Have sensed the bomb and save the Director, Olga Marie! Though too bad some masters got hurt, he was too late to warn them after all... DAMN YOU LEV!

You must be skewered and burn you bastard!

MAN THIS BADASS and sad! Looks like even if it's a different time line, it pains Shirou to see his hometown burned, and looks like Lancer Medusa recognized him... She hesitated and surprised by his appearance, it must've been because... The Fuyuki F singularity timeline's Shirou is dead. That is sad. Seems like feels will be unleash next chapter.

HAHAHA THIS IS HILARIOUS AND AWESOME! Olga reacting to this in disbelief and surprise! Ritsuka and Mash in awe of their Shirou-senpai! CU LANCER IS BACK BABY, CLASS CHANGE SHENANIGAN WOOHOO! OLGA IS BEING HILARIOUS, HER LOGIC AND REALITY IS BEING SHOOKED, She became a TSUKKOMI CHARACTER OF THIS STORY!

Man you earn youself a follow and a fav! You deserve it.

As always this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue

AAA THE CLIFFHANGER! When will it get updated?

Very nice chapter here

U Olga Marie vs Shirou Ultimate would be epic