You know, I'd rather have your story outside of Cannon. this is to build a more original world than yourself

very interesting chapter

i really like

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You have such an amazing talent for writing, Im impressed!

I love this chapter, Motoyatsu finally begins to see the truth, I hope I stop being an idiot.

I love this Rapthalia with a backbone, she is as cool as she slaps the liar, I can't wait to see when King Hajime arrives I bet it will be dramatic, I can't wait for him to put the trash king in his place and show him the true power

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Motoyasu can be blind many times, who knows if it can change anything

Well another change is how unpleased the Pope would be with Motoyasu’s lose in the fight sure he won but it was a pity win maybe this would also push Motoyasu to train his body then just levels considering he lost to pure player skill then a game skill

I wish Hajime and his fellow classmate came and fetch Kousuke already and wreck some havoc while they are at it.

Good chapter

IS FANTASTIC

And in the third wave Glass ran the timer out after kicking everyones ass

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Sigh, the only chance the King had to talk with the 'Shield Hero' is when he is talking with someone else. Also, curious that he had not answered about the queen, maybe he should press that

IT'S A VERY INTERESTING STORY, I LIKE THE CHANGES YOU HAVE MADE SO FAR

IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES